What a great story. You did really well. It would be nice too see if they get together in the end or of it was just one night. Great job. :)
Suck? Definitely not. Wunderbar, Fantastique...I can go on!! Intriguing plot plus sess/kag pairing equals immense fan satisfaction.
This story was great and I enjoyed it, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Oh my good, this is was so good, and has soo much potential for a new!!! I really hope you continue it, bit regardless, this qas quite awesome!! Great job!! :-)
great one shot....although i hope for more....i'm sure this has potential for more chapters ----i'm greedy..i know XD
I commented on this on LJ, but I'm going to here as well! I absolutely loved this one-shot. In regards to the holiday exchange, I really appreciate the difference in the tone of the story compared to the usual "holiday love story". Once again, you write so amazing well and really entrance your readers (: awesome job, Maddie-San!
-MissKatt
I kind of wish there was more of a resolution to his feeling on the subject. But other than that, I really enjoed this. As I read this, I felt like I understood what Kagome was experiencing and why she was doing the things she was. You managed to weave together a story that had hope in it and also showed the real and raw emotions. Great job on this one :)
Wow! I wish I could be able to write as good as you do. All of your stories always capture my attention and have me grasping for more. You are amazing and keep up the good work. Loved it!!
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