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Lazurite (Chapter 11) - Tue 28 Apr 2015

Always good to know about minions. He can't really blame her for that one.


maru'sningenluvr19 (Chapter 11) - Fri 24 Apr 2015

this story is so good. r u going 2 finish it? i would be grateful if u did. i love the plot and the romance and the lemons are great as well. i was sad when the story wasnt done. please finish. i want 2 know how it ends. GREAT writing. bye


KShadeslady (Chapter 11) - Wed 22 Apr 2015

Oh no...really good chapter. So much going on. Thanks for updating. 


iin (Chapter 11) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

oh...it's so breath taking....up date please.....

 

Literary Fan (Chapter 11) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

Noooo! How dare Hanako take Kagome from Sesshomaru. What if she converts Kagome out of revenge and to hurt Sesshomaru? This would really hurt him if she did because it would take away their choice or just the fact of Sesshomaru asking Kagome first. Or what if she drains Kagome almost leaving her for dead? Agh, so many questions. I am really looking forward to the next update. Go, Sesshomaru go! Can't wait to see him kick some major butt. Thank you for writing such an amazing story and keep up the fantastic work. My apologies for not reviewing the other updates. I was only able to read this story now.


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 11) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

oooooh Kagome is so going to be punished when he gets his hands on her lol!!!!! Not onl disobeying your Dom but to wait until he was unaware?! Dang that girl has some balls!!!! The big bad Dom is going to so make her regret going out AND getting kidnapped.

Now though I wonder.....will Hanako turn Kagome into the undead? or will she attempt to kill Kagome and Sesshomaru saves her by turning her? Hmmmm I do hope Michael survives though, losing someone else so close to him while Sesshomaru made the decision to go after Kagome would haunt him, he'd probably feel like he failed Michael by leaving him. ...

I am so excited for the next chapter!


Moonlight Silk (Chapter 11) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

I started reading your fic today and couldn't stop until the last chapter, it is so good and intriguing. I love how you portray both Kagome and Sesshomaru. You write wonderfully. Update soon!!!


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Tue 07 Apr 2015

Wonderful chapter. But I can't see her staying cooped up for too long. Although he will be providing much diversion. Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Tue 07 Apr 2015

Really good chapter! Evil bitch! But I guess we need an antagonist in this somewhere. Nicely done!


Melissa (Chapter 10) - Mon 06 Apr 2015

I am enjoying your story. I like Sessh as a vamp.


Ashatan (Chapter 10) - Fri 03 Apr 2015

Love the update. Can't wait for more!


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 10) - Mon 30 Mar 2015

Ah I figured she might give in to him once he confessed everything to her! So happy he did, it can lead to some really bad mistakes keeping things hidden especially in a D/s relationship. And I loved the scene where Kagome is trying to top from the bottom! LOL! That is such a sub move! And the way she vehemently defended Sesshomaru as a being and not an "it" shows a sub that truly cares for her Dom. I personally agree with Kagome. I hate it when people call babies or another person an "it". People (even beings ;) ) are alive and have feelings too.

Oh I just had a thought! Sesshomaru was wondering is Hanako had any goodness before she turned into the vampire she is now. Maybe if she's lived long enough and did have some decency in her, it has turned dark. But from her words in the previous chapter....it just seems to me that she enjoys being a vampire and likes to cause misery to others because she is miserable and lonely herself, or that she's just plain evil like Naraku is and just wants to hurt others and gets off on it. Like she said, it was Sesshomaru's tragedy and pain that attracted her to him. It's like she has to bring him low especially if he starts to become happy. She never has shown up before, the only reason why she has now is to threaten Kagome in a sense and to try to take away Sesshomaru's happiness.

I honestly think that if Sesshomaru turned Kagome, the only thing that would change is she would have the same strengths/weaknesses as he has and she might become a bit sexier (due to a body change) and live forever. I do not believe she'd become evil or dark - after all, Sesshomaru's personality hasn't really changed much since his first change and he's been alive for a looooooooooooong time. I think right now he's just in panic mode and could not take anything happening to Kagome. I am so excited for this story! Cannot wait for more!

P.S. are you going to have Kagome go through training or just learning as they go kind of thing?


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Sat 28 Mar 2015

Nice chapter, keep it coming. Happy Early Easter!


cho (Chapter 9) - Fri 27 Mar 2015

great story!


iin (Chapter 9) - Tue 24 Mar 2015

oh...it's getting interisting...


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 9) - Tue 24 Mar 2015

Whoa, what a twist.....couple of ways this could go from Sesshomaru's decisions....
He can make the decision that Kagome is better off without him and tries to force her to leave...and with his experience and intelligence, he might be able to force her to leave in the heat of the moment. If he does though, Kagome will be unprotected and Hanako could kill her or worse. Or Kagome could even continuing to return to try to stay with him.

The other option, is he hides it from her which is a huge blow to their trust. After all, lies and omission of lies always get found out somehow, someway. And when Kagome realizes Sesshomaru hid such a secret from her, it could fracture some of their trust they've built up. That's what D/s is truly about - the trust.

The next path Sesshomaru could take, is to confess the new revelations to Kagome so she can be better prepared and more on guard - like maybe not work as much or to be sure to be home at certain times, allow Sesshomaru to protect her, so on. They can discuss this new situation and their enemy and figure a way out to either kill Hanako (my choice!!!) or to make her leave them alone.

But I wonder - is the tale of if you kill the one that turned you into a vampire and you die (or in some stories become human again) apply to your story?
And if push comes to shove - will Sesshomaru deliberately hunt down Hanako and kill her regardless if Kagome agrees or not since Hanako is a threat to Kagome?
ooooo I am so excited!


laura (Chapter 8) - Tue 17 Mar 2015

Love it. Fuck 50 shades. Your writing is much better x


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 8) - Tue 17 Mar 2015

Awesome chapter! So glad he finally came clean with another burden he was bearing. Perhaps he will start to trust her more and show more of himself to Kagome now that he knows she isn't running from him. Though I wonder if either have though of long term or pregnancy? Could Kagome get pregnant? And what about her short mortal lifespan versus his immortal one? I'm sure regardless they would take what they would get but still.....They've both had so much pain that they deserve some happiness.

Also, to your note of "50 shades of gray" I completely agree wtih you. Your story is in NO WAY shape or form a spin off of that movie. It's way, way off base of the bdsm community. Personally, I'm a sub and have been for years. The movie and book do not show what D/s truly is much less bdsm. "50 shades of gray" is mostly just kink. True bdsm and true D/s are so much more meaningful and intimate. What the movie and book portray is just a bedroom kink that most couples do behind closed doors. I believe your story shows a real side of bdsm that people do not know or understand.

The way Sesshomaru is constantly watching Kagome for signs of fear, uncertainty, pain, pleasure, injuries, and even consent, is what a true Dom does. While Kagome (a sub) is trusting Sesshomaru not to go too far or to really hurt her, she is also giving up her control to him. She may feel a bit uncertain (like this chapter when she's naked and vulnerable) but that is the whole purpose. The Dom wants a sub to feel vulnerable and helpless because that also enables more trust to be built upon and further their relationship. Just like this chapter and the last, Sesshomaru is making Kagome verbalize her needs and wants because as a Dom, Sesshomaru has to trust Kagome to say her safeword if things go too far.

Wonderful story and I am so glad you did your research - it really shows!
Please keep it coming, and just amazing job on the details of your story and the D/s relationship!


Literary Fan (Chapter 8) - Tue 17 Mar 2015

I am glad Sesshomaru was honest with Kagome. If not it could have blown out of proportion. Glad to see their relationship is moving along. Great story so far and I hope you update soon.


iin (Chapter 8) - Tue 17 Mar 2015

Great as usual....love you


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