Thanks for the story, but if you could spare the time to go back and take the font formatting out so the text can be resized for people like me who are blind with small fonts, I'd be grateful. :)
sr (Chapter 1) - Tue 13 Feb 2018
i enjoyed your story
Denise (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Jan 2015
What a great story :) I really liked the whole take off how they meet. The whole story was really good.Great job :D
marisel (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Dec 2014
really good story. i like happy endings.
This was great.
Great job! Lovely story, I really enjoyed it :)
Wow, amazing!#speechless
Alma (Chapter 1) - Wed 05 Nov 2014
This was great!!!!! I really enoyed it and hope you keep up the great work.
I just wanted to say WOW!! What an amazing way to start writing again. You are my favorite author ever since I read Her Destiney. This is just another great story to add to my lists of favorites. I can't wait to see what you come up with next, but will gladly read it all. Best wishes...
The longest one shot ever! lol but i thoroughly enjoyed it! i could not tear my ees from the story. I do have a suggustion for future stories though. the phrases "fit to be tied" and "a man/woman possessed" were GROSSLY overused. they are both great phrases but typically should only be used once or twice for the story. sometimes you used them more than once in the same sentence and paragraph. It devalues the phrase to use it THAT much. So maybe you can experiment with other equally effective descriptions. the story itself was creative and very enjoyable. i look forward to reading more from you
TKE (Chapter 1) - Mon 03 Nov 2014
Great story!
OK One. WHAT TOOK YOU SO FREAKING LONG TO UPLOAD SOMETHING TO DOKUGA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and I love your stories including this one from Fanfiction.net and I think you should upload the rest on here 'cause I know everyone here would love to read them. Keep up the wonderful work!
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