My breath literally hitched while reading this chapter. I just love how you describe everything. When you mentioned the grown Sesshomaru...I felt my heart beating so quickly. I could just imagine the hotness! I loved the incorporation of the rain. It made the chapter bittersweet. A great flow from chapter 1 to chapter 2.
This chapter was just so intense as I read the fight scene. So gruesome....yet it tells the reader just how changed Sesshomaru has become. I could see the coldness and lifelessness in his actions. It hurts to see him like this. I can already feel so connected with your portrayal of Sesshomaru. I love it. You did so well.
Please continue this story and I expect to see many more stories from you in the future. You have great potential.
Hyemi (Chapter 4) - Thu 04 Dec 2014
thisss is soooo good!! Please continue this fanfic!!
Caedes (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 Nov 2014
Ah! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Good, keep it coming. Happy Thanksgiving!
rachel (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 Nov 2014
I'm in love. C :
Ai (Chapter 4) - Fri 28 Nov 2014
Please update I wsbt to know what happens next. ????
I've been reading this since the first chapter came out and sorry I haven't reviewed but I love it it's so awsome and the story has so many ways to go from here and I can't wait to see What you will do with this plot and the events that follow it
I love this,:the main villain is naraku. He's so hot. But i prefer Sesshomaru over him. XD
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Tue 25 Nov 2014
Please update this story it's really interesting and wanna see how kagome helps out sesshomaru
Interesting story so far. Please update soon. :)
Saeko (Chapter 3) - Thu 13 Nov 2014
I like it. You write well, I saw no typos. And the story itself flows well and reads nicely. I'm not skipping words like I do with some other stories. Keep up the good work!!
Guest (Chapter 3) - Thu 13 Nov 2014
Love at the first sight. . PLEASE MUST BE CONTINUE SOON
Random question as an after thought: any chance this fic might have some smut? (;
I do enjoy where this is going! Keep up the good work! (:
samantha (Chapter 1) - Wed 12 Nov 2014
This is good . A bit off topic but can you do a Twilight twist Or does anyone know any writer thats done one
what a sweet first meeting! cant wait for more, keep up the wonderful work XLCX
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Wed 12 Nov 2014
Love this spin on Pompei. Enjoying your story very much and looking forward to more.
Oh my ><, i love it. Please do continue it
Marimay (Chapter 2) - Sat 01 Nov 2014
I am enjoying this story and I cannot wait for more to come! You are doing a wonderful job and I know you will continue to do so! And Byakuya? If it is who I think it is, then now i am certainly more interested! Lol, I cannot wait for more chapters!
InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 2) - Sat 01 Nov 2014
I forgot to sign in but OMG I can't wait to see the progression of this story! I love it so far keep it up!
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