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No Uta (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015

Bullets that dissolve yokai from the inside out, goodness! How very terrifying for them all. I'm so pleased that Sesshomaru's resolve crumbled. Thankfully he gave into his heart, though I wonder where else she will be sent and for how long? It is nice to know you read every single one of our reviews I often wondered if other Dokuga author's beside myself did so. 


stoictimer (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015

Thank you!!!  


Tx2 (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015

Yes.

just yes.

I love that we read this story as Kagome goes through time. Every chapter we are thrown and we must endure -without truly knowing the past, even though we've been there and without ever knowing the future- just working towards a vague ideal of something better. This review is kind of jumbled. For once I'm typing it all in one go. Usually I take a few moments to read and re read and part and comb the literature. I read so much into the emotions though that I'm inspired to write rather raw. The goodbye to Inuyasha was heartbreaking and I'm hoping I read entirely too much into that one. Also, I feel like I neglect Kagome's character in my reviews and I'm glad this chapter made me realize that. She's so human. All the wonderful parts about being human. I can see she's not perfect. She sees her feelings and Sesshomaru's as unfair to them both so she runs away from him essentially, she feels so deeply about everything and everyone but she must decide fate in order to accomplish her goals, she would rather the world be in a perfect state of equilibrium always where Yamamato could have grown into a man that understand the grand complexities of love and forgiveness and endurance and so much more But that is not the way of the world as the state it's in and she's realizing that. That maybe she has misubderstood her own goal.  Which mayve she hasn't and is just being human, and once again- that's wonderful. Sorry again, this review is everywhere. But mostly I had to say something because they finally kissed!!! 

YES!

Admist everything, it must be so kind of love for me to still be so glad that they are for eachother.

Thanks for all this, I adore this story.


Ankita (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015

*grins**grins* happpy happy me izzz uber super duper happy hope you update soon


Michela (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015

They kissed!!! *jumps for joy*

I'm so excited I can't wait for the next one <3


Victoria (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015

I absolutely LOVE your writting of this story. It is beautifully written and is so detailed the reader can't help but be drawn into this amazing world you have created. I've read several of your unique and talented stories and will  continue to wait anxiously for you to post new chapter. Please keep writting! You having a truely blessed and miraculous gift with story weaving. ^~^


Jennn (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015

Omg!!!! YESS!!!! FINALLY!! I feel like I've been waiting for this moment for a long long time!!! haha thank you for updating you just made my night. Always looking forward to reading more of this story.


Kimiko-chan (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015

I melted.... Its just..too sweet...


KShadeslady (Chapter 11) - Fri 05 Jun 2015

Very intense and very sad for them both. Maybe some Stockholm syndrome going on here but not quite. At least she hadn't given in to him totally. Nice chapter, tough subjects well handled.   


Loveyaa (Chapter 15) - Thu 04 Jun 2015

Uh oh...Its almost like too much is going on. I feel for Kagome. Her past baggage, Sesshoumaru spurning her, and now WWII. I don't know if she could or should change history that much with getting Japan to side against Germany. I wonder if she will prevent the two atomic bombs from going off though. Slash she should talk to Sesshoumaru and maybe explain why they can't be together. I am glad that Shin is still around and Sesshoumaru has him (and Inuyasha). Way to pull me right back in! I can't wait to see what happens next :)


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Thu 04 Jun 2015

Ugh...Yamamoto again. I should have figured he would show up. Poor Shin, I hope he survives. 

 


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Thu 04 Jun 2015

I love the way you intertwine the history and their story. My heart hurts for them both. Ji


KShadeslady (Chapter 8) - Thu 04 Jun 2015

Oh no Kags, you can't live like that. hoping you throw poor Sessh a bone here soon. Sigh, lovely story. 


Anonymous (Chapter 15) - Wed 03 Jun 2015

Omg why did it have to end 

I love this.. 


Emiko (Chapter 15) - Wed 03 Jun 2015

The way you weave actual history into fiction, make it your own and yet keep it respectable - I truly admire that. Your story is interesting and original and I enjoy it very much. Please keep up the great work!


Blommie8 (Chapter 15) - Wed 03 Jun 2015
I like your twist between jews and youkai. Why is it so hard to embrance the love that she had? At least sesshomaru will always wait for her. Even when she time travelling. I hope they'll can find their love.

No Uta (Chapter 15) - Wed 03 Jun 2015

They way weave in historical events with a tale of yokai, magic and the supernatural is outstanding. You have a gift my dear. I must commend you on your ability - such talent flows through your veins. It is refreshing. Sesshomaru has hardened his heart. He cannot be blamed. There is truth in what Shin says. She is gone far too long. It is a shame that she has no control of it. Poor woman is thrust into whatever era the jewel and or well sees fit. I enjoyed your description of an older, more mature Inuyasha as well as his  interaction with Kagome when he first stumbled upon her. I wonder how long before Sesshomaru pulled Shin from guarding the well? How long before the walls of his heart closed in to protect himself from losing her over and over again. What of their encounter this time around? Phenomenal work!


Alondra (Chapter 15) - Tue 02 Jun 2015

Ive reviewed before...I dont really have anything to review besides...MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGEEER!! I love your story telling and you keep the characters true, you do a wonderful job and this is what I hate about unfinished work, you are always left in suspense waiting for the next chapter.


REI-Angel (Chapter 15) - Tue 02 Jun 2015

This story is killing me. I absolutely LOVE it.

Kagome's pain is becoming more prominent now. It has me aching to save her. To intervene for her sake. Poor sweet girl. She sacrifices so much.

Before, I only felt a bit sorry for Sesshoumaru since he was still fighting his feelings, and furious at Kagome for hiding hers and rejecting him. Why couldn't she just tell him about her destiny! At least he wouldn't be mad at her! BUT alas. That makes for an average story. Your version is tres bien! This is why I leave the writing to you! Haha!

I wonder how long Kagome will have to travel through time before there is a constant peace. Will Sesshoumaru acquire a family of his own before then (with you-know-who)? Will they ever be together or will their love simply stay a dark wish?

This story is breathing perfection. Keep up the excellent work. You are brilliant!


Kae (Chapter 15) - Tue 02 Jun 2015

Wow! Fascinating, and beautiful and heartwrenching all at once!  I can't say how much I've been enjoying this story!  Every time an update shows up, I take a deep breath to prepare myself and dive right in! :D


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