Such a good story so far. I really love the way they both communicate with each other.
Can´t await the next chapter.
First, please allow me to apologise for my comment about a beta. I didn't know that you are not an English speaking writing team. I ammend this statement then to say that you are doing an awesome job for not having English as your first language! I've have been told by many that English is the hardest language to learn. I wish I could beta for you myself but with my type of disabilities I sleep alot and even though I'm American born, my grammar and puncuation isn't as well as it should be as I find myself getting older. I hope someone comes through for the beta job for you just to make this fic the most it can be as I find it very well written and funny.
I also like to say, I think it would be funny also to maybe have a letter or so from Jak and InuYasha like Bella suggested. I'm sure Inu will figure that the thinga she suggested for Jak to do to him will be figured out as only she would know the things that irritate him so and Jak would be so bold as to do anything to Inu just to get a rise out of him.
Gramps was the one who hurt InuPapa?!? Wow, I always thought he was just a harmless old dude. Guess gramps does know a few things for real! So funny. Oh and yes, maybe Kagome going along to the zoo! It's a good start for them to get to know each other on a more personal level.
Again, you all are doing a great job with this fic. Thank you for sharing your talents with us as without writers like you, I would be a very lonely woman as these fics are my greatest entertainment and I love the adventures you all take me on. Gentle hugs and many kisses, JEN
maira (Chapter 7) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
I'm loving this story so far hope you keep it going XD although I can see how you might need to change the formats before to long there's only so much people talk through email before they start using more convenient methods
Eva (Chapter 7) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
I'm so glad to have come across this littlepiece. I'm enjoying the banter (and the judicious use of Jakotsu) very much. I'll be sure to check out your other solo and team stories. Thanks for the entertainment.
Bella (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
LOVE THIS!!! You guys are awesome writers. I can't wait to see how the story progresses. And I would love to see an email from Jak and inuyasha thrown in somewhere along the way... It would be hilarious.
rose (Chapter 7) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
next chapter please
*sneeky onna* She is worthly of being a kitsune mommy.
Great story, keep it coming.
Please write more! I Love this story!
In a way, I'd like to feel sorry for Jaken, but he pretty much is just digging his own grave with voicing every little thing that crosses his mind without even giving a thought to ALL the previous punishments he's had over the years. One would think he's learn something! I can imagine a pinkish purple Jaken making like a chandelier on the ceiling with those big bulbous eyes rolling round and round.
I have just one suggestion and please it is of no real concern of mine as I am used to correcting errors and adding correct wording on fics, but it could use a beta to catch these pesky little problems. Please don't take offense as it is not what was intended. JEN
I'm so loving these letters.
This fic makes me laugh and smile at the same time!! And after the day I've had I truly appreciate that more than anything else!! Fabulous!
Thanks fo rclearing that up. I was worried that she would rant for a second.
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