This story is great so far. I look forward to seeing more of it. I'd caution you to always have dictionary.com open when you're writing, though, as some of your words were misspelled or used wrongly. For example, you used 'adversaries' and spelled it 'advisories' and 'regale' but spelled 'regal'.

Can't wait to see more!

It is very interesting! Thank you!!!!

Great story, keep it coming.

I forgot how wonderful this story was! Please post again soon.

Interesting read thus far... Looking forward to the next update!

Another great chapter!

Such a good start. Looking forward to see where you take this.