Reviews for My sunshine by Coldnessheart

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hana sora (Chapter 80) - Fri 09 Jan 2015

They can have a happy ending relationship, but no they are just too stuck especially sesshy! Too much male pride can kill you straight to the point, huft.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 80) - Thu 08 Jan 2015

Good chapters, keep it coming. Happy New Year!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 77) - Wed 24 Dec 2014

Nice chapters, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


Ree-san (Chapter 77) - Tue 23 Dec 2014

I think it's a really good balance.  I think it's a fabulous job with a complex issue. 


Ree-san (Chapter 75) - Mon 22 Dec 2014

I think Sesshoumaru's views are different from her friends as it didn't affect their lives as much as it did his.  He didn't have someone else to be with romantically really because he was interested in her.  They can certainly put it behind them and see it as just being important that she's there now.  But, again it's from the perspective of just being friends when he wanted more.  She also didn't leave because of them based on nothing but assumptions.  I'm really curious as to who's going to be the voice of reason and really help Kagome accept what she did and work on moving past it in trying to have the relationship with Sesshoumaru that they both wanted. 


cassandra (Chapter 73) - Sun 07 Dec 2014

I feel so bad for kagome. I still can't believe he acted like that! I mean I understand that he was upset but to totally block her out of his life is a little extreme. Can't wait to see what happens next! 


consuelo marquez (Chapter 73) - Sun 07 Dec 2014

everything is coming along very nice. i especilly like the part where kagome says that she "betrayed everyone". Although it seems a bit pessimistic, it does make everything seem that much more real and concrrete (oh, the redundancy). so please continue writing because i love everything you've written so far.


Pixiekun (Chapter 70) - Fri 05 Dec 2014

Really, good built up for this confrontation. 


consuelo marquez (Chapter 70) - Thu 04 Dec 2014

this is a review for all the chapters you ave uploaded in a spurt. oh my god! sesshoumarus reaction was AMAZING! it felt real (As real as fanfiction can be) and everything fused together nicely. it wasnt as fast-paced as i though it would be given the situation, i preferred sesshoumaru's reaction than if he had immediately forgiven her.

 

OMG! i can't wait for the next chapters....im gonna go re-read them again.


Ree-san (Chapter 70) - Thu 04 Dec 2014

I think his lashing out is pretty realistic.  It would be hard to believe that she would stick it out during any rough patches in a relationship.  I think she has to fight for it and show him that she's going to actually communicate and give him a chance to make decisions.  It would be interesting how her friends give her advice and how she tries to approach him.  I'm looking forward to the next updates. 


cassandra (Chapter 70) - Thu 04 Dec 2014

Wow talk about a slap in the face.  I sure hope he can get over his anger and give her another chance!  By the way keep up the good work! 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 63) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

Great story, keep it coming. Happy Thanksgiving!


Ree-san (Chapter 63) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

I really hope this explanation is good.  What she did affected a lot of people and the fact that she now considers that he may have had feelings for her...just means she made a huge decision for him.  Sesshoumaru being Sesshoumaru I doubt he would like that.  I'm curious as to whether he'll be more hurt, confused, angry or a combination.  Does she have the guts to now go after something she's always wanted?  Will he finally call her out on this silliness?  I'm looking forward to the update. 


Ree-san (Chapter 54) - Mon 17 Nov 2014

I enjoyed the update and hearing his perspecttive.  I'm looking forward to hearing how he's going to respond to her re-appearance.  Will he take the initiative and discuss his feelings and/or her disappearance?  I hope to understand why is it that she didn't have any thought that a relationship could potentially work.  He actually gave her all the signs that he was very attached to her and cared deeply.  Her behavior and thoughts are puzzling.  I think that this can be explained moving forward or going back and tweaking the story some.  But, I think this has a lot of potential and I look forward to seeing what you do with it. 


Ree-san (Chapter 53) - Sun 16 Nov 2014

I've enjoyed the story so far, but I think something's missing.  There was no reason for her to disappear the way she did.  Even if she had a crush on him, he doesn't hate her but enjoys her company and cares for her.  So, it's confusing why she feels so strongly that she has to stay away.  If anything, her leaving the way she did would kill any thought on his part of pursuing something.  If he believed she avoided him, he'd be correct. 

I look forward to the next update. 


Pixiekun (Chapter 52) - Sun 16 Nov 2014

It was a great jump from meeting up again in chapter 51. To play date in chapter 52, you should have explored their reactions. What's going thru her mind and His mind? She's attracted to him, ask yourself. First time you see your crush what goes thru your mind?  Asked mysel the same thing. Since, the crush I used to have with a friend when I was in high school is gone. By the time I finished up college. Guys that I like, I get. When I have their attention I got bored and they usually asked me to stopped being with my friends. And my boy friends, are just like brothers.


Marissa (Chapter 42) - Sun 19 Oct 2014

i just realized i said that twice now... haha oh well. 


Marissa (Chapter 42) - Sun 19 Oct 2014

congratulations on getting married!!!


The-infamous-one (Chapter 39) - Thu 02 Oct 2014

Honestly I was loving the story up until this chapter. The fact that the beast just goes bat shit, didn't really care for.  

other than that, good job keep it coming.


cassandra (Chapter 39) - Wed 01 Oct 2014

Waiting in anticipation to see what sesshomaru does! I wonder if he saw the whole kissing scene? 


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