Very nice chapter. Some back and between the two camps, keeping the story moving. I like that you have made Kikyo a bit more sympathetic.

Hum kogome is always looking for trouble. Now inu thinks sessssessshy took her.

Your story is progressing nicely. Not too fast or rushed. I like it and want to see where it goes. Very nice chapter. Still a lot of spelling and grammar errors though. Your beta should be catching those.

Nice, could use some work on spelling and grammar but a great start.  Also I believe it is spelled Shippo not Shipou, if you wanted it to be original.

please update again soon.

I like! Please update soon!

I like the story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

Interesing beginning.  Still a few spelling/grammar errors though. Looking forward to reading more.

Great start!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Good start, can't wait to see where you take it

next chapter please