I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Guess he didn't want to stand in front of her arrow after that.
Oh! I absolutely loved this chapter! Never in the past numerous moons, have I enjoyed an altercation between Sess and Kag so much! ~Cackles in glee~ Oh my my! What treasure, has a old hag like me, stumbled upon?
You, my lovely neko-chan, have left our beloved Rumiko-san's portrayal of Sesshoumaru in dust. I claim thine Sesshoumaru, as all mine now!! ~Cackles in evil laughter~
Make me not wait anymore for thine sumptuous feasts, my dear Nemuri-chan.. ~winks~
Nicole (Chapter 4) - Wed 17 Sep 2014
Awe can't wait till next time :)
I love it when Kagome is as bullheaded as Lord Fluffy and can basically back up her threats.
Can't wait for more!
Both chapters are nice, keep it coming.
~~Ahhh! I officially love this fic so far! XD Keep it up
Nicole (Chapter 3) - Tue 09 Sep 2014
So far this is a super good start! Can't wait to continue reading ?
I'm a horribly picky reader I must admit, but I have to say that this is something fresh and wonderful. I haven't been this intrigued with a fanfiction in a long time. I do hope to read more soon, but being an author myself, I do know time is a very hard thing to hold lol So I won't threaten and cry, but I'm very excited about this. Thank you for writing.
This chapter was an absolute delight! I have not had, for so long, read such an amazingly perfect characterization of Sesshoumaru, esp. the part where Sessh's way of dealing with the advisors was described. For me, that is the perfect in-characer Sesshoumaru. :)
This chapter has effectively brought me out of my reviews hibernation (a terrible sin, i know!) of the past 8 months. :) While not underestimating any other authoress's works, I must admit that, saying this is easily the best piece of character description I've read in the last 8-9 months, is just the scratching the surface of all the oodles of praise I'm tempted to heap on you! ^_^
And so I dedicate to thee, a Death-By-Chocolate cake! (my usual chocolate cookies just won't cut it here ;))
Looking forward to an enthralling and brilliant plot ride through each upcoming chapter here!
PS: [The Voracious monster has awakened and is coming for you!! ~drum roll~ :D]
Akoq (Chapter 2) - Fri 05 Sep 2014
Interesting! can't wait for your updates.
Nicole (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Sep 2014
Lol! That poor, young youkai! Kagome's escape from Sesshomaru's shiro made me snicker in amusement. Kagome's thoughts and memories at the beginning of the chapter are intriguing...
Poor Sesshoumaru...is it bad that I laughed at that last part? I think he's going to need to drink something a bit stronger then water before this day is done.
Thi sstory sounds interesting, keep it coming.
How long has it been since the last battle? Such an interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Beautifully written.
I can't wait for more.
Sounds like this will be an interesting story. Look forward to the updates!
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