Reviews for Legal Jargon by Kjinuyasha

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natalia (Chapter 16) - Sun 30 Apr 2017

I keep wondering, is she a miko? Let's see how they will work together! I still her dad will be shocked! Thanks for updating!


Leaora (Chapter 15) - Sat 29 Apr 2017

Hi there! I am a first time binge reader. First, congratulations on your fantastic accomplishments and thank you for continuing to juggle RL with fandom! I am thoroughly enjoying this tale and look forward to more. BTW, this last chapter was so amazing, I think I'll wake up my husband.


RealSesshyLover (Chapter 15) - Tue 25 Apr 2017

I am loving the story! Looking forward to the next update. I'm curious to see where the final arch of the story is. Initially I thought there'd be a race for partner, but it seems the story is taking an unexpected turn with Kagome potentially leaving and starting her own firm with Sesshoumaru. In my personal opinion it seems the story could climax and conclude at that point unless you decide to take the story in yet another direction. You started something when you brought up Sango's past and how her parents died.... perhaps another arch would be the exposure of youkai society? There's some mystery still in the story... looking forward to seeing what direction you decide to take everything. Hopefully you're able to resolve everything. So far the Sango thing is wrapped up... I wonder if Rin, Miroku and Kohaku will have larger roles... keep it up, interested in seeing where this goes.


Sessygurl (Chapter 15) - Mon 24 Apr 2017

That's was great. You tied up some loose ends and even got the hanyou in. I love how they complement each other in this story. Thanks for the update. Im looking forward to seeing more of the demonic side come out to play.


Catherine (Chapter 5) - Sun 23 Apr 2017

so that was what was up with the title chapters!!! WOW! you must've done some serious research to write this--this fanfic has so much detail in it, it almost seems real!!! keep up the good work!


Sessygurl (Chapter 14) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

Thank you for some background here. This should prove to be a interesting cat between the two. In addition, you can do your stories in a google doc and it will automatically be saved. You can access it anywhere and no worry about deleting it.

-Will Kagome have Miko(Priestess) powers?

-Thanks for the quick update


iin (Chapter 14) - Mon 17 Apr 2017

Was the creature seen by kohaku a demon?...what's kinda demon?...and kagome really wanna go out from her father firm to achive her dreams?

 

But I think the situation will be better  if she out of her father firm and she will get a news experiences (maybe worse and more dangerous, but good for her)....

 

I rather suspicious about gatenmaru....but oke please more thriller...I love it..thaks...


Sessygurl (Chapter 13) - Mon 17 Apr 2017

I loved this chapter. It had a little bit of everything. I like how you were true to Miroku's perversion...lol In addition, do you think Rin will have some type of relationship with Sesshoumaru? Thank you for the Easter chapter.


iin (Chapter 13) - Mon 17 Apr 2017

this story is unique...I like kagome & sesshy portrayal as a lawyer....mature, smart and professional


Sessygurl (Chapter 12) - Sat 15 Apr 2017

-It seems like they now want to be exclusive with one another. However, did they mean to have unprotected sex? I mean Kagome made a poing th first time the slept together. i cant remember if they used some in the office. 

-I know you are ready to hang this story up but I think that is an interesting angle with pregnancy and want to leave the firm.

-How did he know about Sango...smell?

 


jodi (Chapter 1) - Sat 15 Apr 2017

Awesome job I love the story.... keep the juicy chapters coming


Ruth Gustafson (Chapter 12) - Fri 14 Apr 2017

I love me so easy lemon pie!  

How you went about getting out of that triangle was well executed.  And the reveal as well, seeing Sesshomaru out of character is something new too. I know I will be excited for the next chapter and to see how everything comes to a head when it does. 


Sessygurl (Chapter 9) - Fri 14 Apr 2017

Much better, thank you.


natalia (Chapter 12) - Fri 14 Apr 2017

The dog is out of the bag! Posesive much? I liked it! Thx for updating!


natalia (Chapter 11) - Fri 14 Apr 2017

surprise surprise! another update! hm he will have to tell her e is youkai soon no? anyways she also has to talk to sango! thx for updating it was unexpected but pleasant!


Despymoo (Chapter 11) - Fri 14 Apr 2017

I LOVE IT ! Only wish the chapters were longer but I understand the demands of reality. Awaiting impatiently for your update.


Sessygurl (Chapter 10) - Fri 14 Apr 2017

I wasn't really feeling the relationship with Sango  on an intimate level. It seemed so sudden. Please after sleeping with Sesshoumaru. Seems like Kagome gets around. I don't know, I just needed more background on Kagome's part. Possibly something may happen if she leaves the firm. Although she could be testing the water with them both? Thank you for th e update. 


natalia (Chapter 10) - Fri 14 Apr 2017

Hm yes you can let her leave and get to naraku where he is a bad jerk yada yada but it's too predictable, we know naraku and kagura usually have these roles so it won't be unexpected. Try to find a twist, something unique! In rest i quite enjoyed this fic, sorry for not reviewing earlier! Thx for updating! Good luck!


Toni (Chapter 10) - Fri 14 Apr 2017

I like the story  I know you said you are not getting any reviews this is a good story line  I think having her go with kaguras firm would be a good twist to the story  


Ruth Gustafson (Chapter 10) - Fri 14 Apr 2017

I have been reading this on and off today and I have fallen head over heels over how these two interact. Business when they need to be but friends/lovers the next. That Sango thing just thru me for a loop. I can't wait to see how things go in the next chapter.


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