This is getting confusing.... I'm not trying to sound rude, but there's too many unconnected dots within the story.maybe if you could clear up what's going on in a longer chapter it wouldn't be so hard to follow?
I feel sad for Laura Beth that she had to relinquish her control to Kagome. I'm not sure how it was that easy to just give up her children and everything she'd known her whole life, unless she's still there and will always be there observing from the sidelines.
Glad that Kagome is back. Sesshomaru should have known Kagome was never one to just blindly follow orders. Looking forward to the reunion and the dreaded council's decision.
More, keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
maira (Chapter 33) - Tue 26 Aug 2014
Oh you know what would be awesome if Sesshomaru took what ever punishments are still comeing because of the whole she's mine she's mine to protest and care for so he take the punishment and then heals her. Haha that would be cool true love XD
I hope nothing bad happens Kagome when she gets in the woods, keep it coming.
Wow...just wow! Quiet a dilemma they're all in huh? Who would've thought Kagome would marry in Naraku's family of all people! I really hope the council does not prosecute Kagome for infidelity coz that is just ridiculous! She obviously wasn't the same exact person who willingly committed the act! Yes soul mates, but even she didn't know that, nor did Sesshomaru. The story is very interesting and I am excited about how you develop the storyline. Update soon please!
Episode 4 of Sailor Moon Crystal has already aired, If you missed it you can watch it on youtube. Nice chapters, keep it coming.
Nile (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Aug 2014
The idea of this is great, but it seriously needs a lot of editing. I'm getting a little confused because of the lack of punctuation and switch in point of view.
I'm enjoying this & looking forward to what happens next. About the lord & sama thing it's a bit overkill, like calling him lord lord, so 1 or the other but not both.
If you missed episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal you can watch it on youtube. Both chapters are good, keep it coming.
marisel (Chapter 26) - Mon 04 Aug 2014
Sounds like their in trouble ..this is a crazy chapter. it is a cool story. keep writing friend.
Episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal aired today. Great chapter, keep it coming.
I hope Kagome is okay and she gets all her memories back, keep it coming.
snow (Chapter 21) - Fri 25 Jul 2014
i hope she does not make it easy for him. no one would welcome being attacked and kidnapped lol.
Next, keep it coming.
More, keep it coming.
marisel (Chapter 18) - Mon 21 Jul 2014
This is so cool. And the biting return her to a younger age is a creative touch. Very imaginative and original.
If you missed Sailor Moon Crystal episode 2 you can watch it on youtube. Good chapters, keep it coming.
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