I feel a bit sorry for Naraku. I hope he gets a pack, and friends soon. He really needs someone better than Hojo. And hopefully, Hojo will get what is coming to him ASAP!

That was Awsome.

Aww that's so sweet!! 

Hehe. So weird to see Naraku as a sympathetic character. Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Poor Naraku.

^_^ hope you are wellll and don't need a surgery :)

Poor Naraku! I feel so sorry for him, to have a so-called friend who is only using him........sounds like what Hojo does here. He is a user. Naraku deserves better!!! I hope he gets it and that Maggie doesn't die! See! I want Naraku to have real friends and for a spider to be safe! Isn't this story great or what!!! Keep up the great work! And by tyhe way, I am glad that you are feeling better enough to crank out this chapter. Thanks again!

Naraku actually sounds like a decent guy in this fic. He's not really all for doing bad things.  I could actually see him betraying Hojo.  It would be cool if he turned around and decided to help kagome! 

Well thats not creepy at all. Maybe Kagome will see the spider, freak out, and Sesshoumaru will release his poison whip to rid her of the creepy crawly. But yay for Sesshoumaru learning quickly. I wonder where this all will take him and them. I can't wait to see what happens next :) 

 Wow it Poor Naraku it makes yaz Pity him super easy. Acid Whip AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!

It would be interesting if Naraku decided to betray Hojo and lie about what all Sess can do... Once he discovers he is on the wrong side..

To many prompts for my taste. I mean you have a prompt every paragraph or every few sentences. Thats so boring.

Awe, that was such a sweet ending!! Can't wait for the next chaps!!????

Happy Writing,

     ;Riccie23

Things are finally moving along with Kagome's protection detail coming into use and Sesshoumaru's training sessions. I wonder how long before papa Inu finds out about it all though. I can't wait to see what happens next and how long they last before it all comes crashing down again :)

Love Akemi's thoughts in this chapter!

OMG Kagome and Sesshomaru have Great Friends.

im happy that you updated and sad that you're gentitals are causing you upset.

D'oh! I just sent a bunch of computer equipment to recycling a few weeks ago. I found your gofundme through your twitter account, I can only manage a few bucks right now. I just moved and closing wiped me out, hence why I got rid of so much stuff, to make it less stuff to pack. As a temporary solution I'd suggest a USB mouse, either wired or wireless. I might have an old laptop that I did keep, that you can have, once I figure out where I packed it. I probably have a couple mice too if you need them.

No wait! He's going to throw acid at her right? And the only thing she's going to lose is her clothes. Sesshoumaru is going to be super mad. Enough to make him transform yet? Hope he doesn't kill anyone. I'd had to see him get kicked out of school.

I was wondering when Naraku was going to show up. although, disturbingly, he seems much less sadistic than Hojo. The only thing I'm thinking is you've had so many threats to Kagome and Sesshoumaru fail now, that this most recent one doesn't seem very threatening. I'm wondering where you're going with it...