I love this story. It's one of the best. You're a really good author.
I can't stand these pitiful readers that cannot leave a respectful review. Don't like it, don't read it, as simple as that.
They also seem not to comprehend that there are such genres as the one pop. called "slice of life", and that there are lots of mangas about it. In fact some of the most revered authors worldwide, Charles Dickens, Tolstoy or Mark Twain for instance, have books included in literary realism. So what the heck are they complaining about?
I still hope that you'll continue it and that you'll continue writing your amazing stories.
Thank you so much.
I love this story and I'm dying to read more. Is it going to be continued?
Carlyn (Chapter 79) - Fri 21 Aug 2020
Ok soooo, I'm going to be really honest here. This story is as wonderful as it is terrible. Here's the thing.... the writing is good, very few grammatical errors, you feel like your personally involved with the characters, the characters themselves are interesting with interesting backgrounds, the lemons are yummy, and overall you've done an amazing job of setting the stage. However, it's like you set the stage and then told the actors to just sit there. Like you forgot to introduce a real plot, with a twist, a bad guy, an end goal in mind, anything really to move the story forward. This story is almost on its 80th chapter and I'm only halfway there, AND it seems to be meandering in the dull daily life of these two characters rather than incorporating anything exciting. They barely even argue. Kagome is clearly a drinker, she's got a jerkwad of a controlling ex, her best friend is a bigot. Sesshomaru has an abusive brother, a neglectful asshole father, and a body to die for along with a self esteem that's been beaten to death. You have a LOT to work with here to finally CREATE A STORY, but rather than doing so you're lingering on grocery shopping, periods, movies, etc. Every time you do introduce something that might finally give this plot a twist, it's fleeitng, never to be seen/heard from again. It's way past due for something interesting to happen. The story literally clings to almost every moment of the day except sleep. From waking in the morning, to bed at night. It's getting boring. This is the second time I've read this and I remember getting really frustrated at this story around this chapter the last time I read it before I gave up on it. Which really is a shame because you're honestly talented. I'm going to skip ahead a few dozen chapters and see if anything more interesting happens. But if they're still just in their apartment, screwing and cooking I'm going to have to give up again.
Carlyn (Chapter 76) - Fri 21 Aug 2020
Ibuprofen? For her period?? What, is this girl a novice??? LOL!
Correction*one of my favorite writers
Yea this is droning on. Chapter 50! A whole 50 chapters and only about 3 weeks have passed and not much happening. I've officially started skimming through this. I'm not sure this is a story for me. She is my favorite writer but not everything is for everyone which is understandable. It's a good story, it just isn't working for me.
Maybe it is because Im binge reading, but alot of the chapters are seemingly repetitive.
That money this really isn't that serious for it to be mentioned so much. In reality couples don't work like that
In the chapter kagome says sex soon but based off the reviews soon means a hundred chapters later. 30 chapters deep and I'm getting tired sigh
This story is so different I'm sad that it's not complete. This is an amazingly different portrayal.
Ah he finally said it
This whole story is giving me butterflies in the tummy! Sessh is just so adorable. I really hope this is complete ????
Omg Sesshomaru was bullied? This is so different
I have been waiting so long for an update and of course you never disappoint! I love it as always!!
Damn...Sango is truly a monster in this fic. I’m hoping all the baddies get killed off...
Absolutely love this story. Can’t wait to read when Kags meets Sessh’s father!
To be honest, I thought they were gonna hold out till they made it to the car! But I am glad sess had the balls to - we’ll go balls deep in the dressing room
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Kagome is so strong!
wonderful chapter
so sweet i love it
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