Wow! Never before have i read a plot like this, i must say it was unexpected...great, but unexpected. Do you plan to continue this? I'm hoping for a happy ending and a little vengeance on Naraku. :)
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Wed 09 Jul 2014
OH....MY...GOD!!!!!!!
( Melts into chair)
;)
Plese make a sequel, I want to see if they brake this curse and Naraku has to suffer
Sailor Moon new anime has already premiered on tv, If you missed it you can watch it on youtube. This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
Hmmmmm... Interesting? I do really like it! And I've certainly never read anything like it before. I think either a sequel or continuaton would be nice, but it's your story and I think you did leave it with a solid end.
Gosh, add any more stripes
and Sess will be turned into a tiger! Lol. He actually only has the ones on his face and arms, we got a glimpse of his torso, when he had to rip the borrowed human arm Naraku lent him and there were no stripes there. Anyways, his dog form shows the stripes on face but not any where else, perhaps yeah on his wrists and ankles but they'd be hidden under his fluff. Lol! Btw, I don't think you meant to use lathing, which is work done on a wall, maybe you meant lapping?
joyouki (Chapter 2) - Wed 09 Jul 2014
Wow! This is hot!
*MAKES OFFENDED SOUND OF RAGE WHILE POINTING AT YOU* i DEMAND you make more! Naraku has to die! they HAVE to get tohether! forever!
Oh my gosh this is even more beautiful! If there is more I can't wait for it!
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Sarah (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014
Nice story but what are they? Why did they have to wait to get her again? What happened to her to make her forget?
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