Like it.

I love the blooming plot of your story. It's a refreshing departure from the usual way Sesshomaru is depicted in fanfiction. I like it. I eagerly await for updates.

oooooh i really loved this one. Some already assume that he is lord of lands and of a palace. its something we don't take notice until one points it.  Or maybe he is Lord but i really like how this story goes

I think this is a cool idea, but it's kinda annoying how Sesshomaru keeps saying "I, Sesshomaru" usually it's "this Sesshomaru" which to be honest I don't think he ever said that. I haven't read the manga version, but I have watched the anime so I don't think he ever said that. So I guess authors do that to make him seem more uptight, and arrogant..