Really nice chapter. Sorry to hear of your losses. thsnk you for updating. 

Another nice chapter. Your story is interesting but I still see a few spelling errors. Have someone check it for you. Don't rely on Spell check, it only catches misspellings not incorrect words. Like there (a place) instead of their (like their dinner) and trial (a court proceeding) instead of trail (a path). Good luck with your writing. Cheers. 

Wonderful start. Poor ole Jaken. Of course he always seems to deserve it. Looking forward to more. 

Please continue. You've got this sesshomaru fans attention :-)

That was a great update, I look forward to more to come!

(So sorry about your losses; i am certain that they will be greatly missed.xo)

I enjoyed 1st chapter. Very interested in what her sickness was. Can't wait till next chapter!

This was very interesting from the start.  Looking forward to more.

i love it please keep going please update soon :)

This is a good start, please update soon

more please i love it  i was roling on the floor  watching jaken getting kicked

Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!