Reviews for Extraneous by Wunderberry

Becca (Chapter 3) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

Awww, this story is so interesting and the characters so well written. I hope you will finish this story one day :)  


xDori (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Jul 2015

Nooo don't lose interest! Lol. May inspiration find you to continue this fic :)


Mona (Chapter 3) - Mon 20 Jul 2015

I must say I was happy to see an update for this fanfic and i enjoyed reading it.  Hopefully you will be able to update again soon.


sonja hand (Chapter 3) - Mon 20 Jul 2015

Good start there is a lot of smoothing needed 3rd chapter ... Stiff and a bit hurried, you have a good start for a well rounded story maybe a look through will inspire filling it out right


No Uta (Chapter 3) - Sun 19 Jul 2015

It's a shame you've lost interest in the series. This would have made a great story. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Jun 2014

Great chapter, keep it coming.


Lady Ashe (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Jun 2014

Ive really enioyed what you have written so far! Please continue. Sesshoumaru is has quite the snarky personality. I love it. 


EsteSapphire (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Jun 2014

Oh my, what a cliffhanger, I love this.

Please update soon :)


Stella Mira (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Jun 2014

I quite like this. Sesshomaru's portrayal is very interesting, a deviation from the normal and refreshing. The plot has barely begun to unravel, but it shows great promise. The only thing I can offer as criticism is that you need to fix your verb tenses.

Thank you for sharing this story and I look forward to the next chapter. :)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Jun 2014

Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!


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