I am confused. I'm not sure what's real anymore. I read and re-read. This will make a good movie given the storyline. Constructs of time are removed. First there's Kikyo, then Kagome's presented as an echo of Kikyo. Then it appears as if it's Inuyasha that has gone mad; Kikyo's supposedly dead. Then Kagome's given the chance to take revenge but becomes played. It's unclear. Which then is true? In the end was it Kikyo really creating her fantasy world? Kikyo being manipulated to conjure an imaginary world with Dr. Naraku and Sesshomaru colluding? Or was Kagome real, drugged to take the identity of Kikyo as leverage against Inuyasha? You won't answer us though. You've been offline for years.
Whoa. What just happened? How did Kagome end up in an asylum? Gosh, you really twisted the story good.
Great writing though, the way you described Sesshoumaru as a dragon and Kagome as his prey. Though I'm still every bit confused ><
Can't blame Kagome for falling for his trap. He seems so sinfully tempting and so wickedly mysterious.
Will you write from Sesshoumaru's POV? I am dying to know what was going through his devious mind.
Anonymous (Chapter 21) - Wed 29 Apr 2015
Wow. I'm speechless... thank you. Please let there be more.
????????????????? I don't see how this is an ending.
Wait, what? This will give me nightmares for quite sometime. Wow great story, I guess. Not my cup of tea but as a writer you did the job. Im sure lots of people are still thinking of this story.
Marie (Chapter 21) - Sat 26 Jul 2014
Okay I am teribbly confused? What just happened. This was a good read even thoughill have read it again to understand it.
This story was awesome, amazing and I enjoyed it!
Anonymous (Chapter 21) - Fri 25 Jul 2014
Okay so I can't blame you because you warned us about this one, but it was so good. So I'm hoping – expecting :-) that in the sequel she gets to Sesshoumaru back for all the evil, nasty things he's done. I mean what if she actually convinces Naraku to help her. She could always pretend to be Kikyo and wreak havoc. Seems like a better plan than being locked in a mental institution with Naraku as your overseer. Anyway... That's how I'm going to envision the story continuing... I have to go now it's time for my medication;-)
Stella. No. Stop. . . You're insane. . . You're a crazy person!
What? What was that?
How-
Why?
Wha-
But.
But kagome....
and kikyo?
then she was her but, inuyasha....omg.
Sesshoumaru was....
And Naraku at the end...
But how?
But seriously. I loved every word. Biggest Plot twist. EVER.
Your work never ceases to amaze me.
Keep up the phemomenal work.
Gah! You really enjoyed that didn't you! I both live and hate stories like this. I love the twist, hate never knowing what really happened! Nicelittle story though, I love when I have to keep guessing all the way through.
Finish? I don't
understand.......
OMG!!! Talk about a wicked twist! Just what was real and what wasn't? Whew, that was just amazing. As usual, you deliver. This time with a sucker punch.
Sailor Moon new anime has already premiered on tv, If you missed it you can watch it on youtube. Nice, keep it coming.
so intense!!
my thoughts and words are all jumbled. Must revisit and review again later... =]
Cool, keep it coming.
I think she'd be happier if she stopped trying to figure him out. Well, less miserable anyway. How she's still attracted to him is beyond me.
Nilee1 (Chapter 19) - Thu 03 Jul 2014
Please please please don't let Sesshoumaru win the war!
another awesome chapter, stella!
I am telling you, I actually had a withdrawal effect from your lack of update! Now that I had my fix, I can properly go do my daily works. =)
Thx, btw, for wishing me luck on my exam (it is for 3 days straight; 6 hours each).... I really do need good luck the way I'm studying...
Anyways, back to your fic: So it really was Sess who deliberately messed up Inuyasha's life by killing Kikyo (or being responsible for her "death"). And Sess told Yasha that it was Yasha who had killed Kikyo?!?
Wow, Sess is so diabolically sinister and cruel in this fic. I really wish that Kagome learns to weild this "dragon" soon!
Also, could Kagome and Akiko be twins?? Nah...just my wild imagination. So they are definate half-sisters. I so very sympathize and pity Inuyasha (and Kagome). I'm glad to see that Kagome is peeling Sess's human mask one by one and is truly seeing Sess as he is: a dragon. So she must stop falling for him and make him fall... (I wonder if she is going to help her "father" and/or Inuyasha at all??) im rambling; it's late ...
Thanks for another great update! Please keep it coming!!
Nice chapter, keep it coming.
My God, this just keeps on getting better and more convoluted. Hmmm, Dragon, better a snake. Ok, dragons are big snakes. Thanks for the update. Great way to start my week. Cheers!
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