Good story so far 

Great, keep it coming.

Another fantastic chapter, I was so scaredfor Rin. Can't wait for your next update.

P.S I noticed you wrote allie instead of ally. Might be a good idea to fix that.

Update soon :)

Phew! Crisis averted for now. Great chapter. There are a few spelling mistakes I noticed :)

I love this, the way you portray Lord sesshomaru is just perfect. I really can't wait to see what happens next, hope you update soon.

Pretty Interesting Introduction, this story holds a lot of potential. Keep on the good work, the first chapter had me hooked.

 Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5. Great chapter, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!

Your story is awesome thus far! I love the Kagome mind. lol keep it up, please.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

Very promising, please continue!