This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

its good. i love fics where its sesshoumaru that messed up (or at least that is what it looks like so far)  so please continue   if theres is anything "bad", i'd guess it would be the need to add a bit more detail and better flow, but that will get better the more you write. so yeah, i like it so far :)