Natalia (Chapter 3) - Mon 03 Jul 2017

such an intriguing idea and twisted plot! i like it! i am so curious what will happen next!

as always your ideas are amazing! thx for sharing with us! good luck and take care!


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 3) - Fri 19 May 2017

Can't wait for the next chapter. Really enjoying it so far!


Kitsune Diva (Chapter 3) - Tue 01 Jul 2014

I love your story, it has a little mermaid feel to it. Espcially with the blindness and constant pain as a price.  I love the alternate world you've created. I like how you worked Naraku in as the true evil in the cave, it suites his character. I look forward to reading more. 


Lace (Chapter 3) - Sat 31 May 2014

I'm loving this so far! :) I did not expect blindness to be her trade, and I really enjoy stories that force us to strenghten our other senses. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Sat 31 May 2014

Keep it up, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.


Margarida (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 May 2014

Seriusly, this story just gets better and better! *-* 

Thanks you for the update! <3 


LavenderBoots (Chapter 2) - Thu 29 May 2014

Blind! I did not see that coming (bad pun not intended.) Ugh I cannot wait to read about what happens next! I'm so excited and intrigued. I am curious however, do you plan on using pain in the same way HCS had, in that the little mermaid's feet felt like she was walking on daggers whenever she stepped? Or was this pain only momentary, and the blindness the only lingering sign of the price she paid, like the disney version? 

Also I love how you pushed her into the deal, I was curious as to how this particular part would work out and i think you found the perfect solution with a forced marriage. By the way does this one have a time limit or way for her to recover her sight? (sorry if i missed it, i get over-excited and speed read sometimes.)

-Bianca


Shaneka (Chapter 2) - Mon 26 May 2014

What the hell just happened, update soon.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Mon 26 May 2014

Great chapter, keep it coming.

 


lindsay (Chapter 2) - Sun 25 May 2014

I always love your stories, and just by the first two chapters I feel as though my feelings towards this one will be the same! :) Keep up the great writing! I'm looking forward to the rest of the spin on this fractured fairy tale :D :D :D 


Margarida (Chapter 2) - Sat 24 May 2014

Wait, she lost her vision? o.O Poor thing :( 

Thanks for sharing! <3 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 May 2014

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!


Luna C. (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 May 2014

This seems interesting, I can't wait for your next update. :)


kaoruhana (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 May 2014

I love the story so far though I am curious about the "cave man".  I assume we'll figure things out as the story continues.  One thing: you wrote in the fourth paragraph "complete inhalation".  I believe you meant "complete annihaltation".  


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