Poor Kagome sitting in jail after her horrific ordeal
@_@ lasttt chapter I hope its a happy ending T_T
next chapter please
Awww :(
Great chapter, can't wait for more.
i hope they get to Kagome on time. Update soon
thanks for the new chapter~~! the short on rin was so heartbroken, good write though. can't wait for a new chapter~! :)
I feel so bad for Rin in this fanfiction....
I hope you finish this!
HELLO!
Big fan of this little chapter story and I'm so glad you updated. I'm a new user here but I've written fanfics on other websites and I'm a very good beta. I'm interested to see how you will continue this story. Keep writing!
Waahh after such a long time
Yah!you are not dead iam so glad I love your story can't wait for the next chappie so Zura away
Nice, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day
Great chapter update. Waiting with excitment for the next chapter.
If you missed Sailor Moon Crystal episode 2 you can watch it on youtube. Great chapter, keep it coming.
Yay! He finally acts on his thoughts! I wonder what Naraku has in store and how Kagome's life will change now that she knows of the existence of demons. I look forward to reading more.
While your first chapter is good, I find the over use of colloquials makes the dialogue forced and the flow somewhat off. I love the idea for this story. It is unique and I love that. But the dialogue makes it hard for me to read.
*Tiana
I am loving this fic I can't wait for more!
Great chapter, update soon.
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