I have enjoyed reading this but I really wish there was more because it doesn't feel like an ending. What happened to Kaede and what happens after this night? Did he take her away?

Interesting story and brilliant writing.. I was so captivated by Kagome's character and the mysterious Sesshoumaru. I really liked how the story developed..from losing Haru to finally being with Sesshoumaru, everything was perfect. Thanks for this story! :) 

Short and sweet

It would have been a little helpful however if you had put the Japanese defitnion or terms at the bottom where your chapter titles were concerned. I had to search the meaning of each chapter otherwise nicely done

Excellent work!!

I can't say it was what I had in mind! xD Still it was amaizing! ^^ 

Thank you so much for this! <3 <3 <3 

Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. This story was sweet and it had a wonderful ending!

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!

Thank you for sharing this

Great story. The ending is pretty good.

another? So she might be engaged to marry someone else?
Ooooooooooooooooooo the plot thickens!!!!!!

Gawd, I waited forever for this! (Okay, not forever but you know I want another update the moment you post one!) It's not my fault your writing is addictive it is your fault!

I can't believe this is only going to be three parts; it's absolutely amazing and I love all the details and the story behind it. It's magical, like a sort of fairytale, a story from the books. And that feeling only grows with each post. Although, maybe it's too dark for a fairytale aha but it is what makes it so amazing. You're so good at weaving together darkness and angst and it just keeps pulling me back in! I cannot escape your incredible writing talents, I'm doomed.

First of all, I love the relationship between Kagome and her brother. It seems so natural for her to fall into the mother's role and I love it. You've got her down. And it's also incredible sad that she had to take on that role. Again, originality. Usually her father is the one who dies. See, I never know what to expect with you and I freaking adore that. The sister-brother teasing remains though, even though she's becoming a mother figure to him and I like that, plus it made me smile so much.

I'm sad about their father, they lost their mother and now they sort of lost him as well. It breaks my heart because I feel like Souta is too young to bear that cross (knowing what his father is really like). Kagome tried so hard to keep the illusion up for him but it simply was not enough and it's terrible. Hopefully, he thrives to be better than his father, not worst. Although, with Kagome by his side, I'm hoping he'll be fine. 

I don't think that girl is over getting over Shiro Inu ahaha. I laughed when Souta asked "how do you know he's a him". haha! It was funny seeing him like poking holes in her little haze of fantasy. He does make a good point though! 

That scene with her father freaking destroyed me, like I don't think you even understand. I wanted to be mad at her father for doing this to her. Like, she already takes care of her brother and everything else. She tries to pay his debts, she does everything and he ruins everything and now he wants to make her go through that horrifying experience? GOD! But then, the way you write his despair, how much he misses her mother, I just can't bring myself to fully hate him! See what you've done! Now, I feel bad for him! Haha. Dang it.

Poor Kagome who does not know she is speaking with her precious Shiro Inu. I like that there is a sort of contrast between what he is and what she thinks he is. Because as a dog, he cannot speak so she sort of made up her own fantasy about how he is, who he is. And he is that deep inside but still on the outside, on two legs, he's the Sesshomaru we always knew; a little stoic, maybe even a little rude ahah. But he can't help being attracted to her. Can't wait to see how you're going to explain his attraction to her. Little human girl, aha. He tried to push her away, make her forget, which is how he protects himself, but you made her stand her ground. 

AND THEN HE MADE SURE SHE STAYED HIS.

Talk about having issues ahah. This is so Sesshomaru like. I don't like you but you know what you won't go away so I guess fine. Which so makes me think of how Rin ended up sticking around. I guess it's a pattern with him aha. I do feel bad for Kagome, I mean I know she's happy. And confused but like, he's just - he needs to get his shit together. And now she can't like be a miko, she's tained. Ah god. Can't wait to see how she deals with it all. After all, she doesn't know he's Shiro Inu and he just laid a claim on her aha. AND OH BOY, cannot wait for the showdown that will be the third part.

Thank you so much for writing this amazing piece!

This story is truly amazing! 

It breaks my heart to know that we will only have another chapter! 

Thank you for the update! <3

Noooo cliffhanger!  Great chapter.   Im sad that this is only three chapters.   I can see this as a much larger story.

thank you! 

Nice chapter, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

As I have said many times before dog!Sesshomaru's stories have a special place in my heart. The intro was wonderful, the voiceover of a movie, as I have already told you. It immediately drew me in and I wanted to read more. You do have that special gift with words. I can picture everything so vividly and you always leave me craving (in a good way!) You have a gifts for not only mastering already existing characters but also creating your own from scratch.

I found myself in love with Kagome's friends and their distincts personalities. They were not just a part of the background, you made them real people that affected Kagome - and her life - and they had their own little worlds. It's little details like that which add to a story and make it absolutely wonderful.

Kagome's relationship with her parents is wonderful and I must say it is awfully nice to see her with a father. We barely ever get to see her have a father-daughter relationship. There's a cuteness in her relationship with Kagome. She seemed uncertain about youkais but then, she took good care of the shrine and made sure to look after it. Which, really displays her personality (the one she will have as a grown up), while she is only just a child. She's hardworking and she loves helping those around her. Very, very good characterization which is hard to do with a child. Good job seriously.

I do like that she was able to be honest with Kaeded and I just sat there riveting in the fact that *soon* it's going to be confirmed. She's just a child, she has this innocence and this... she lacks the darkness adults have. She doesn't think about these evil beings, those youkais who apparently exist and could hurt her. She's a kind soul. You portray that wonderfully with little scenes.

I like how much she's trying to hold on to the fact that youkais do not exist, which reminds me of Kagome when she first fell into the well. She's a very cute child. And it's hard for me to like child!versions just because they are rarely well written. You have mastered that skill, seriously. I am always in awe in front of your writing skills. 

Seriously you had me fool for a while. I thought that little toad was just... a toad and next thing I know, DRAMA. Good drama. And I was excited, waiting for Sesshomaru to make his grand entrance. I knew it wouldn't disappointed. I like that she was so hypnotyzed by him despite the acts he was commiting (I mean, it deserved it, but wow, I loved it. Got a little chill when he called that youkai!)

I am sad that Haru died. I mean, it was a new character but like I mentionned you're very good at making OC very...likable. So I was sad to see her go but her death was a necessity. Because of it, Kagome will have a bigger attachment to Sesshomaru but it will also bring a spiral of darkness because knowing Kagome, she will never let go of that guilt. She will always feel a bit responsible for what happened. So I foresee a lot of darkness in the coming parts. Already, there was that hint of darkness in the last paragraph which also showed what I said; she'll hang on to Shiro Inu. Because he's her way out of the darkness.

Chilling chapter and I had shivers the whole time. I am highly anticipating the next parts!

This story is reallllly intresting! *-* 

Can't wait to read more :D 

Thanks for sharing!<3

Thank you!  I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see where it will go.  Please update soon!

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

I really love this story. I can't wait to see more! 

Two more. . Cant wait it

I'm interested in you next chapter. This was a very intriging start to your story. Very nice. Update soon!