In this chapter we get a glimpse of Sesshomaru's feelings for Kagome.
"Walking over to Sesshoumaru he clamped a hand on his shoulder, 'you give them hell Sesshoumaru, and....' He glanced in Kagome's direction then back to his son as he spoke in a lower voice so only he could hear, 'keep her safe.'
Sesshoumaru's eyes narrowed slightly eyeing his father, Toga had always been able to figure out things he didn't want him too."
When I read that last line I actually held in my breath!!!!!
I thought it meant that Sesshomaru already cared for Kagome and his Father had realized his feelings...but reading on...I found that it wasn't so...but still...I don't know why...but I was drawn to this paragraph of yours.
Well done with this chapter and I am SO hoping for more. I'm so glad and honored I was able to make a banner for this AWESOME story.
You definitely have a way with your words. AND I LOVE IT.
Once again, you've added your twist in this plot and now Sesshomaru and Kagome are chosen to enter the Hunger games. I don't know how Touga can maintain the anger to just go straight up to Naraku and slaughter him. OFF WITH HIS HEAD!
I love Kagome's character already! Inuyasha is well portrayed as well. And the snippet of Sesshomaru's appearance in this chapter was flawless. I LOVE them already in this story! Well done!
Okay...so while I was reading the prologue alone...I was thinking to myself "How in the world does this story NOT have more reviews and attention!!!"
The very first two paragraphs had me sucked in. Although it is a crossover with the hungergames...you changed it up A LOT. Naraku is the Emperor and I was so intrigued by your choice. Then you went further and plan for the Lord over the districts to participate in the hunger games. I was so impressed. Truly. It makes me want to read more!
Hoping to see an update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Great, keep it coming.
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This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
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