An outstanding story, i would be pleased to hear more from you. Also would love to hear about future escapes that kagome might have attempted or plans to do? Also from the previous chapters is it possible that some Yokai are planning a coup d'état? To overthrow sesshomaru? The reason i state this was that it was suspcious how the Lady's grandfather summoned kagome when you or "kagome" plainly stated that he could've mention it to sesshomaru a long time ago, also that he was five years too late. The grandfather also states that back then it was basically inpossible to do so, now five years later does it means that he has the power to do so? Or is it sesshomaru's obession with kagome is becoming more than it bargain for ? Bah to many questions and i have no idea if i got them right.
Great, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Oh shit.
Can I kill Sesshomaru?
He such a bastard right now!!!!
And what is with the child? That is not very healthy for both.
A really great chapter and I can´t await the next.
Keep it coming!!!
Enjoy to write these^^
Silence-Midnight
Great chapter! It was definitely worth the wait.
I just started reading your story and it amazing, so dark and filled with all type of emotions that i too am experiencing while i read.
Ana (Chapter 5) - Tue 20 May 2014
Tell you the truth, am confused... o.O
Chap4 you gave the impression that she was trying to kill herself, and apparently, almost succeeding! Now however, she was running! Trying to escape??? o.O
The other thing bugging me is the fact that she's pregnant, Sesshomaru knows it, and yet he decided to lash her? o.O Ok he wanted to punish her, but what about the baby... She could have suffered an abortion! o.O
Never the less, thanks for the update! <3
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Sun 11 May 2014
love it so far!
Emily (Chapter 4) - Sun 04 May 2014
Damn. Haven't seen the Lord this crazy in a while. Nicely done in the lunacy department.
I wondered when it would be too much for her. Does the flashbacks mean that Sesshoumaru killed everyone? Where is Rin? How about Jaken? I don't understand how she is in this position still. Did she try to escape? I feel so bad for her. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Nice chapter, keep it coming. Happy Easter!
Please more!!! Making us wait so long is not fair. This is one of the best stories so far.
sam (Chapter 4) - Sat 19 Apr 2014
Poor Kagome! I read all the chapters but I forgot why she isn't using her powers to escape and its so sad that Shippo is dead. I'm pregnant right now and I know for a fact I would go insane if someone took my baby!
Jade (Chapter 4) - Fri 18 Apr 2014
This is scary good. Well done. I'm sad that she didn't get to bond with her kids.
Uh oh...
Ana (Chapter 4) - Fri 18 Apr 2014
This is horrible.... And at the same time, amazing....
Good job, really...
Thank you for the update! <3
Okay, now I hate Sesshomaru. He is such a bastard in this fic!
Did he kill the Inu Taichi? So either she is saved by Sesshomaru or the servants somehow manage it. Maybe Heizo will save her?
And Sesshomaru will not be very amused. And the Lady? The bitch will also not be very amused.
But they are both scum in my eyes.
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Conclusion: Very good this chapter and it is something else as all the other stories here.
I mean Sesshomaru can do such a thing. It is not excluded. And I can understand why Kagome choose this way to escape them all.
But I also think that Sesshomaru normally wouldn´t do such a thing. It is against his Honor. So maybe Kagome will ask him what his honor or what his father would say to such a thing(?).
You write this really good and I can´t wait to see what happens with all of them. I hope Sesshomaru will suffer for this. And the bitch too!!! Maybe there is no Happy End. We will see.
I hope you enjoy to write this fic and look forward to your next chapter^^
Silence-Midnight
MASMA91 (Chapter 4) - Fri 18 Apr 2014
WOOOW!! Well, If I was her, I'd probably have tried this move earlier... specially now that we now about the current "tears" yuck. Poor Kagome. When will she be free?? Or when will she get her revenge by running or having a child that loves her?? PLease update soon!! I reaaaaaally want to see Sesshoumaru's reaction towards this Kagome's attempted suicide! Please please don't let us hanging for so long!! Keep up the good work! =D
Nile (Chapter 4) - Fri 18 Apr 2014
Despite Kagome's situation, this is really well done. I can see how she turned to this as her mind changed through her ordeal.
Update. Now.... Please?! lol actually I'm quite hooked. Soooo yeah :)
Did he kill them all when he kidnapped her? I also hope for Heizo, but this is not a site dedicated to other pairings. I wonder why Sesshoumaru doesn't put something more to his interactions with Kagome? Are their children full blooded youkai? I cannot wait to see what you share with us in the next chapter
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