this was a very good story. it was simple and to the point. the plot was original and i loved it. it was sad to see some of the family members pass away, but it would have been corny to see them live a long life. i was hoping Rin would have married a demon and lived longer, but Kohaku was in the story so i can see why you didnt do that. i liked your writing, but i got confused in places because i didnt know where one part began and the other part ended. all in all you did a great job writing this story and i will be looking for more stories from you. c'ya'
*JAW DROPPED* I couldn't get enough of this, I really think this story is one of my favorties!!! I was completely hooked, I even took my laptop to work just to read this!!! BRAVO!!!!!!
I Love the stroy.
This story was amazing and awesome, and it had a wonderful happy ending!
Ahhhh to cute to xute!!!!! Thank you for finishing the story and while im sad Im happy to know what happens!! Hope that you continue writing great stories!!!!!
TKE (Chapter 23) - Sun 13 Apr 2014
This was an awesome story!!! Love it!!
Great story and keep up the amazing work all around. Good luck!!
Nicole (Chapter 23) - Sun 13 Apr 2014
That's a very nice finish. I'll definitely look forward to reading your next story, whenever it comes :)
Yay for happy endings. I enjoyed your story and always looked forward to the updates. Can't wait for the next one.
zPlease don't be long as I eagerly look forward to your next creation.
Nice chapter, keep it coming.
Great story and keep up the great work.
rose (Chapter 22) - Fri 11 Apr 2014
next chapter please
mari (Chapter 22) - Fri 11 Apr 2014
im so sad that it's almost over but i love this story so thanks.
awwwww they are so cute!!!!
Nicole (Chapter 21) - Fri 11 Apr 2014
I enjoyed that immensely. ;)
Particularly having their neighbours at the resort call in a noise complaint! (You'd think it would happen more often in the modern-era stories... especially as much noise as most author's have them making...)
Double congrats to the happy couple :)
joyouki (Chapter 21) - Thu 10 Apr 2014
Love it! Love it! Juicy goodness!!
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