Great chapter, keep it coming. 

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. 

great start! but sango is more sisterly than that. waiting on the next chapter.

The slayers name is spalled Sango, not Songo.

Couple things there you need to know. It's Sango not Songo. And another you did have "these when people are talking" hard to tell the difference between thought and speech. You should get a beta to help you out

It's a great start but ummm there aren't any " " marks where you have them talking do I got a little confused.