Going great sofar, just some minor grammar issues, mainly with then vs than from what i have notised atleast.
Then refers to chronological/time "first this, then that".
Than is comparative "This is biger than that" (or like the end of ch32 when Sesshy tells gramps he will have to do better it should be "You will have to do better than that priest." also im not sure but i think there should be a comma before "priest")
Kat (Chapter 38) - Sat 22 Feb 2014
You know your evil right? How could you just leave us hanging?????!!!!!!!! lol cant wait to see the next chapter! this storys great
I am really enjoying your story. I like Sesshoumaru's openness and acceptance of his feelings. He is very sweet in this story.
Nice chapters, keep it coming.
Great story, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
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