Wonderful chapter, again with a most appropriate name. It was good to see some light at the end of the tunnel for Kagome and Sesshomaru. I love the vulnerability he showed when he thought she didn't want his babies. And wow, a proposal! Good for Kags! She's definitely something if she can bring the Lord of the West to his knees like that.
And finally, the culmination of all that tension and need. Beautifully written. I was so relieved when they finally did it!
Definitely an appropriate title to this chapter. Even in Feudal Japan...there be haters.
what a passionate, relief of a chapter. It's lovely that that Sesshomaru didn't care that he and Kagome had an audience. Such sweetness after such gore and violence. Well done, as always!
What am amazingly dramatic chapter! Kagome has truly come into her power as a priestess, especially with her ability to use a demon's youki to her advantage! You are so adept at descriptive writing to the point that I can see each nuance in my head. I love this story so much!!!
I remember finding this chapter profoundly disturbing. Such torture...I thought Sesshomaru would never come back from that. What a gory picture you've painted, my dear. Well done!
I like the concept of Shinzui. Very nice touch! No nice touches for Sesshomaru though.
You've painted a fine picture of despair. I felt utterly hopeless when I read this. Very good!
What a cliffhanger! Well done!
The tides of war are coming, and Sesshomaru seems to have taken precautions. He seemed very grateful when Kagome let him know she was happy to be at his Shiro, with him. He's so cute when he's vulnerable. Great chapter.
Liking all three chapters, keep it coming.
what an awesome chapter!
I love this chapter! Can't wait for the final one. Although, it's sad that the story is coming to an end; this is one of few stories that is dear to me and a definite favorite. Will definitely be re-reading this in the future again and again...
Yes....just yes. Alllllll of this. Yes!
Fantastic chapter!!!i you my dear, are one of the best on this site for writing battle scenes. Love it! The method Kagome used to beat Kota was absolutely creative. Burn, heal, burn, heal......on and on and on... He deserves nothing less.
i can't wait for the last chapter....I knew you wouldn't leave it at that!!!
Awe that was sweet! So sad this is almost over :) Until next time :)
I love the sexual frustration and the tension created by the power of a new enemy. Great job. I'm trying to catch up, so I can finally read your new chapter! I won't let myself do it until I do. :)
Is it over?! Please say it's not so! I want to see the mating ceremony, a massive lemon and a few years into the future! Oh but gosh this was SO good! Epic... beautiful! And that proposal, I LOVED it! Thank you for such an amazing fanfic, I thoroughly enjoyed every last word from beginning to end.
awesome story great update loved it thank you.
Love it!!!!! Was at the edge of my seat!
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