this was a good dark fic, though it's putting dark plunnies in my head for SK &Kagome/othermale too...
Ah~ I was so conflicted with the ending! I'm glad Kagome expressed herself, and I'm glad Sesshomaru got his comeuppance, but In my head I still fantasized about a sappy/happy ending...but that's not real life^^ It was a good read, thank you!
Me (Chapter 6) - Wed 16 Jul 2014
Jar of hearts
wow total mind blow. EPIC! you have officially gained a positive review and a new fan
Debra (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Mar 2014
Great ending! I loved it, and believe that sometimes you can't have everyone in the story happy. Sesshoumaru didn't deserve a happy ending in this one, and I'm glad you didn't have her change her mind last minute as to not hurt his feelings. In fact for Kagome finally seeing closer in the end it was a happy ending for her at least. You know, her letting it all out and moving on.
Looking forward to your future works.:-)
Debra (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Mar 2014
Great ending! I loved it, and believe that sometimes you can't have everyone in the story happy. Sesshoumaru didn't deserve a happy ending in this one, and I'm glad you didn't have her change her mind last minute as to not hurt his feelings. In fact for Kagome finally seeing closer in the end it was a happy ending for her at least. You know, her letting it all out and moving on.
Looking forward to your future works.:-)
That was absolutly beautiful. I'm actually really happy that in the end, he felt his own heart break. It hits close to home for many women, not every story is happily ever after. Please keep up the amazing stories.
Girl Im glad Kgome told his ass off! he was being a bastard inconsiderate motha-f*&^ for real. i hate when women go through things lke that. I know its hard to do and im glad i learned at a young age that sometimes its good to just let go!
Great story!
Holy crap that gave me a cold feeling in the gut but he deserved it. Every bit. As a woman who went through it, I only wish I could do that to that POS...but one day....one day.....I will have my revenge. But then on another note...what if she was pregnant from that encounter????
Ariel (Chapter 9) - Wed 05 Mar 2014
YES!! It's good that he got what he deserved, but I wonder how Kagome fares after this? Does she get over him? Maybe you'd consider an epilogue? :D
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Tue 04 Mar 2014
Bastard deserved it!!!!!
And that takes a lot for me to say 'cause I Luvz me some Sess/Kag....... AND Sesshoumaru is just...so.... SMEXY......BUT had an azzzhole do the same to me...... so.....Yeah.......
BASTARD DESERVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT FIC!!!!!
Lexy217 (Chapter 9) - Tue 04 Mar 2014
Any chance of a sequel?
mary (Chapter 9) - Tue 04 Mar 2014
I think there should be an epilogue here, to know what happen when they separate, and to show if kagome becomes happy with her decision, :))
Can we have epilogue?
maybe sesshy fails in life, goes bancrupt, and commits harakiri
Kagome and Rin gets married and lives happily ever after
Then both of them spits on his grave THE END.
Akita (Chapter 9) - Mon 03 Mar 2014
Applause! Encore! Encore!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! IT'S OOOOOOOOOOOOVER :((
That reaction aside, your story was excellent. I was always looking forward to the next chapter. Your build up was great and flow of the story is as good. Although I understand that it was promted chapters and you already have to finish, I just felt that the Sesshomaru in this story should have experienced as much as Kagome had if not more. Not just a one time break, but repeatedly broken, shattered into tiny million pieces. A one-shot about Kagome getting married and being happily ever after with someone else would be just perf. God, I have so many bad feelings about infidelity. Anway, excellent read. Thank you!
TKE (Chapter 9) - Mon 03 Mar 2014
I've been strung along by a guy before and he ended up sleeping with my so called friends and a cousin after we had a daughter and let us high And dry. It's unimaginable emotional pain to love someone and they flaunt their sex life in your face :(
This story is very empowering to all the women in this world who deserve to be treated with respect and should never take emotional abuse from any man!! Awesome work!!!
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