Keep it up, keep it coming.
uhuhuhuhuh Kagome is in troble now! xD
I don't know if I want to know what's gonna happen next xD
Loved it! :D
Thank you for charing with us! <3
I just want to say I love this story. Hate cliff drops though. But, for this story; I'll gladly endure them. Please keep the updates coming. Thanks for the great read!!
Tierney (Chapter 13) - Fri 21 Mar 2014
I am absolutely loving this!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!! Please update soon the wait iskilling me XD
Next, keep it coming.
Akita (Chapter 13) - Fri 21 Mar 2014
Cliffies are just unfair...
love this fanfic/story it is thr reson I get up in the mornings to read more,is rin going to be in this? is kagome going to be traped in hell with sesshomaru?is Nadine going to hate kagome coz sesshomaru wants kag?
Akita (Chapter 12) - Sun 16 Mar 2014
The only negative is that there isnt more. Keep going!
Tierney (Chapter 12) - Sun 16 Mar 2014
this is getting interesting!! *que evil smirk*
Drama, keep it coming.
Ok, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
Tierney (Chapter 11) - Sun 09 Mar 2014
I'm loving this can't wait to find out what happens next!! XD
Much to my own shame, I am usually a silent reader which is horrible of me, but I had to review this. I think the direction you are taking his story is brilliant. It is unique and sexual, and most of us Dokugans love that (we're such hentai's, ne?). As for your writing style, its sound with the occasional errors (I dare you to find a story with not a single error). My only suggestion woul to not go over board with what you are trying to dramatize. ?!?!?! Aren't needed after a question, nor are all caps. For me, they are quite distracting, but that is just my opinion as a beta. Speaking of which, if you are interested in one (-hands imaginary card-) here is my card. Feel free to contact me. Again, good job on the story.
-MissKatt
Monica (Chapter 10) - Sun 02 Mar 2014
Niece and aunt are going to fight...loved the new updates!
Nadine was a kind woman now look at her I wonder will she do the same to kagome? love this fanfic keep it coming
That was an interesting update. Looking forward to seeing how (or if) the harem is going to react to Kagome
Interesting, I can't wait for the next chapters, keep it coming.
Haven (Chapter 8) - Wed 26 Feb 2014
Holy shit!!!! What I loveee about this story is that you make Kagome cover all her bases. Can't explain it other than it's like when you watch a movie and the protagonist is so stupid you want to just scream "nnooooooooooo!" or throw popcorn at the screen? Well, not this Kagome, she ain't no dumb cookie...but as the title of this chap aptly suggests, she can't stay hidden from him. Thanks for update.
Monica (Chapter 7) - Wed 19 Feb 2014
I can't wait until they meet!
Haven (Chapter 7) - Wed 19 Feb 2014
Totally creepy. Love it. I wonder how many other ways will she try to destroy the book?
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