Great story! Very exciting. I like the military theme. awww the feels between Sess and Kags are great! Can't wait to read what happens next:)
Great, keep it coming.
All six chapters are good, keep it coming.
Mona (Chapter 7) - Wed 23 Sep 2015
Hoping for an update soon.
Mona (Chapter 5) - Sat 19 Sep 2015
Great!
Hope there isn't any scenes of forced intimacy to come, if not then I can't wait to read more.
Hi!Sorry I didn't review on time.It's just that I wasn't able to for a while but I'm back now and keep the chapters coming.And good cliffty by the way.Untill next time:-)!!!
love it keep it coming
keep it coming!!
I LOVE U FOR THIS!This already has me excited and it is only the second chapter:-) Do not give up this story:-)
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
OH snap! I don't want you to die either Kagome! lol
Love this chapter, can't wait to read more! :)
I love this concept, and was thinking of writing something along these lines myself (but I don't have the time!). So I am so glad to see you're doing something like it :) A great start, I think. Also, I love Miroku's last name. I chuckled :P
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