Awww! Poor Sessho...You are an awesome writer! Please continue.
I really liked that chapter. Puts Sesshoumaru first time experiencing humanity in clear perspective. I say you did a ridiculously good job portraying it. No confusion, easy flow.... novel perfect.
And his little panic attack was cute. I feel bad for him sure. ... but it was still cute. I'm all like dawww and awww over here
I was so sad for him. It was... oh. Poor him.
I don't think anyone has ever grasped this the way you have and made it seem so... real, and very poignant.
Nicole (Chapter 15) - Sat 02 Aug 2014
That definitely did not dissapoint! Your description of the difference between Sesshomaru's experience as youkai, hanyou, and human was amazing. I love that the experience gave him a moment of empathy and compassion, too.
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired two episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Good chapter, keep it coming.
Daniela (Chapter 14) - Wed 23 Jul 2014
Ohhhh shitttt, Sesshomaru is gonna freak...
I can't wait to see his reaction when he turns human for the night!
Argh!!! I need chapter 15! This one ended to soon!
Thank you for updating :)
l'-'jj (Chapter 13) - Mon 14 Jul 2014
A wonderful piece of fanfiction! And I am not just saying that because yesterday I devoured your other fic, Trick of fate, and could not go to sleep until I finished it. Left me weeping for more. Which I sorta got, but now that I have finished what is there of this one... Yay for you, you are one quite talented writer!Thank you and keep up the great work (update soon)!
Nice chapter, keep it coming.
Nicole (Chapter 13) - Fri 04 Jul 2014
I find it interesting that the one good thing he'll admit to himself is that he's noticed the colour of Kagome's eyes. As a dog demon, would Sesshomaru lack the ability to distinguish some colours?
Hmmm....
Well well...
Daniela (Chapter 12) - Sat 28 Jun 2014
I feel sorta bad that Sesshomaru threw up, poor guy. Although I liked the ending..a lot..
Kae (Chapter 12) - Tue 24 Jun 2014
Last line was the best. :) I love how this is so DIFFERENT from the other body swap stories, and well done!
How humbling. Good work on pack interaction. It all seem so convincing. I can almost peg you for a wolf. Lol
Cool chapter, keep it coming.
Nicole (Chapter 12) - Sat 21 Jun 2014
I can't help laughing at Sesshomaru here. His pride just keeps taking him down. Hopefully he'll learn to listen to the advice/suggestions of the others with regards to taking care of himself...
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