Yay! I love this story. You are a very good writer. I am excited to see how this goes! :) Keep up the great work!

Ahh, loving this story so much already! The characterizations, and everyone's reactions under the circumstances, are just so spot-on! Loved how, after her moment of disbelief, Kagome could really tell that 'Inuyasha' was actually Sesshoumaru - though it is a really funny picture, imagining Inuyasha with such a cold, regal bearing. :D

And, yay, now they're pack! Excited to see where the story goes from here, and what sort of mischief Inuyasha has been causing in the Western Lands!!

Could it get any worse? I can only imagine Inuyasha flipping out in Sesshomaru's body, cursing and yelling his head off. And there's no way he'll think of Sesshomaru as Alpha. "Keh! Alpha, my ass!" That witch is so dead when she's found.

It's YOU!  I'm so excited!  I enjoyed Trick of Fate so VERY much, I'm happy to see you write again! :D

WOW, I just found this and I am VERY excited to see where it goes!

This is amazing! Your writing is brilliant and your story is riveting! I am looking forward to more chapters! :)

I can't wait to see what happens next! I bet that she falls in love with him while he's in inuyashas body!

Ok lets just let it be known that Kagome using the 'sit' word just because she wants to is abuse.  Pure and simple abuse.

cats out of the bag

My guess is that Kagome is gonna fall down laughing at this. :D

I wonder what the real Inuyasha has been up to in the meantime...

I like this story so far. If Sesshomaru is in Inuyasha's body, I can only imagine Inuyasha in Sesshomaru's body, spouting out curses and saying 'Keh!' all the time. LOL

I like the possibilities I see here...

Nice start, Pristine. :)

Great chapter!

I loved the way you portrayed Sesshoumaru.

I also adore the way you introduced him to the beads!

I look forward to more of this wonderful tale!

~Starfyre

Poor Sesshoumaru.  Already suffering from the subjugation beads.:)  I like the set up you have so far.  I can't wait to see what all you have planned for this story.

Awww poor Sesshomaru, he might as well have said something. I wonder how Inuyasha's holding up being in Sesshomaru's body.

Ahaha...Sesshoumaru got 'sat'! Love it! Bonus points for the word "chicanery" - definitely sounds like the sort of stuffy language Lord Sesshoumaru would use. :D

Thanks for the fast update! - Keep up the great work!!

p.s. - Sorry for the awful typos in my first review. I was reviewing on my phone for once, and autocorrect totally failed me. D:

Oooo, Sesshomaru got sat...

Hehe

Wow, Sesshou, how did ya NOT see that one coming...

ROFL

I look forward to more!

~Starfyre

I really like this set-up!  Can't wait to see how he handles being Inuyasha (and vice versa?). 

I really like how you've started this out it, gives a fresh perspective to the body swap plot. I also think you did a great job capturing the essence of Sesshomaru in your writing and I'm excited for more chapters!