yaay for update mistakes! LOL!

Absolutely lovely. His reservations and stubborn denial are delicious.  I just love it when they fall in love so perfectly in character. Well done.

Beautifully romantic --to answer your question ;-)

Yes, I would say it was a cute romantic feel :) 

I did notice one thing that needs to be changed. You wrote haunt (as in ghosts) instead of hunt. Just thought you should know. I look forward to your next update!

AWWWWWWWWW!!!

I JUST FELL IN LOVE.

wonderful!

Beautifully so :) love it!

next chapter please

That had me snorting and finally barking out laughter! Can't wait for more!

I'm fanning myself!

Awesome!

This is interesting.  Please keep the updates coming. :)

this sounds awesome so far! can't wait for more!

Woot! Pretty nice begining 

Really like the way this started!!!  Looking forward to more.

concern, indignation and restraint--didn't see that coming :-)

~~Norri! I'm curious to see where this one is going! :D More please!