At first I was skeptical about the three some and Marus way of treating her but I really liked it. It wasn't cheesy, it was well written and now I want to read more. Maybe a little of him softening up to her. He can still be demanding and bossy but I feel like I need some reassurance that he may come to respect her or ateast not cheat. well whatever it was phenomenal
This story was great and I enjoyed it,Happy Valentine's Day!
Koi (Chapter 1) - Thu 06 Feb 2014
That threesome was good! How unlike you! lol This was good...I can't believe I'm so late! GREAT job as always!!!!
Mimiru (Chapter 11) - Sat 25 Jan 2014
Smut, smut, smut, beautiful smut!
I LOVED IT!! For yout first time writeing a threesome it was pretty good :3
Ana (Chapter 11) - Sat 25 Jan 2014
O/////O
OMG I really don´t know what to say xD
Except.... PLEASE do a sequel! Please I´m begging you!
You can´t leave this story like this *-*
Thank you for this lovely story <3
*on floor, twitching* Oh, I don't even have words for how incredibly HOT that was. Kagome is one lucky bitch, let me tell you.
*walks away fanning self*
That was....FREAKING HOT!!! Wo~ow! "SmutQuel" indeed! :D I'd have never guessed this was your first time writing a threesome!
Ya know, this really makes my day! Apart from the miraculous updating as soon as I reviewed Ch. 10 (lol!), I gotta say, I've been in love with Toga from the start of the story, so nothing could have made me happier than seeing him here at the end, in such an *ahem* large role. :D
You are AWESOME! This story has been FAN-TASTIC - Thanks so much for sharing!! <3
Yay, awake & reunited at last!! Loved the conversation between Kags & Sess, even if it was a bit one-sided haha! So many little comedic touches in this - death threats = really upset, Sess looking older than Pops, Kags' Mama saying to heck with what's "proper" - just awesome! :D
Also liked Sess's possessiveness in this chapter - very hot, hehe :3
So one more update, then? Well I suppose all good things must come to an end. I have greatly enjoyed this story and can't wait to see how it ends!!
Now, get to writin' girl! :)
Ana (Chapter 10) - Fri 24 Jan 2014
Ohhhh *-*
That was so emocianal, even if Sesshomaru was emocianal as a rock can be... Ok, a rock can show more feelings than Sess, but hey xD He´ll get there!
Thank you so much for the update! <3 (Looking foward to read the next chap. *-*)
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! PLEASE LET THERE BE SMUTS! I LOVE IT!
This chapter was awesome! Sesshoumaru was kick ass! I actually chuckled when you mentioned that Inuyasha turned human for a second. XP
There better be a sequel. I'm just sayin' ;)
OH my god the suspense is killing me. What are you doing to me, woman? I JUST WANT THEM TO MEET AND HUMP AND MAKE UNCONSENSUAL BABIES OKAY!?! Consensual would be fine, too, if that's the way you're going to swing it. I'm down. I just need them to interact and for Sesshoumaru to get all growly and for kagome to be like "eep!"
Hmmm....Next chapter maybe? ;)
Haha, I love Toga in this - he cracks me up :D
So Sesshoumaru wants Kagome...but will she want him? As powerful as she is, it doesn't seem like she'll have to put up with just anything from him. Interested to see how their relationship will play out!!
And yay for Kikyo being brought back! Now Inuyasha has to build her a new house. :3
Ana (Chapter 9) - Wed 22 Jan 2014
Well something tells me that Kagome is not gonna be happy with this decision xD
Can´t wait to read about their enconter ;)
Thank you for the update <3
Koi (Chapter 9) - Wed 22 Jan 2014
This is getting so good. Kikyo admitting that kagome is more powerful than she...That would be the day. lol This is getting good I wonder what Kagome's reaction will be when she wakes? In her spirtual dreams she seemed like she's aware of her situation...i can't wait until the next chapter!!
I think you did a fine job describing the fight scene! I had no trouble following the action, and flow of it seemed on point to me. :)
Karate is awesome though! - wish I had a skill like that!!
Naraku's backstory at the end was quite interesting. You managed to turn him into a somewhat sympathetic character after all. I found his and Kagome's interaction in line with the spirit of the canon. In the end, there is a moment where she reaches out to him in much the same way. :')
So...what happens now? ;)
Koi (Chapter 8) - Tue 21 Jan 2014
I thought the fighting scene was great! Your too hard on yourself. This chapter was amazingly good. I actually felt bad for Naraku, which is a first. Lol I never ever fell bad for that dick, but this time... I did. Bravo I can explain the emotion that I was feeling when I read his passing on, you portrayed Kagome good. I can see her doing something like that, she is so selfless. Loves everyone and has no hatred for anyone. Good job! I can't wait until the next chapter.
I think you're being self conscious for no reason. This chapter was awesome! The fight scenes were great! The bit at the end was kind of a curve ball, but I like it. Naraku is an evil bastard, and I like how you had Kagome work through his past. It ALMOST made me feel for him. Almost! It must've been Kikyo he killed with his last breath, right? Or attempted to kill... who else could it have possibly been? I LOOOOOOVE THIS CHAPTER! And I can't wait until Kagome and Sesshoumaru have their first face to face knowing exactly who the other is. ;)
Looking forward to seeing how you are gonna write that!
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