I love this chapter. The humor was really good. I was laughing so hard. I hope Kagome gets her memories soon. Keep up the good work :-)
I like the story so far. Its different from other stories out there, that I'm currently reading. I think you should continue writing. Practice makes perfect. :-)
tonya (Chapter 6) - Sun 16 Feb 2014
excellent! cant wait for the next chapter
Good, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
* another chapter or two in* BOW CHICKA WOW WOW.....*laughs manically*
Love your story! cant wait for the next update!!!!!!!
Okay just got around to this chapter and I have to say I am well pleased..very cute and funny...
When my sister was five I told her that babies were made because a boy sneezed into your mouth. She believed me and started wearing face masks because she didn't want a baby. So when I read that I couldn't stop laughing for about ten minutes.
Loved the chapter! Keep going!
Love, love, love! If ya ever need a spare beta, pm me. I have tons of time on my hands... Keep up the good work!
Cool chapter, keep it coming.
Dandie (Chapter 5) - Wed 29 Jan 2014
I indeed liked this chapter. I like the way the stor is going. Keep up the good work! :)
Tonya (Chapter 5) - Wed 29 Jan 2014
great chapter
guest (Chapter 5) - Wed 29 Jan 2014
I really like this chapter it was hot and funny
guest (Chapter 4) - Wed 29 Jan 2014
I wonder who is it>?
Please make the chapters longer ":-)
Ooo....DRAMAAAAAAA!!!! * hops around*
Marimay (Chapter 4) - Sun 26 Jan 2014
And the plot thickens!! I can't wait for all the affection and drama to start!! Update soon!!
Hi! It's so nice to meet you! I love 'Unexpected'! I can't wait for your next chapters! Good Luck!
Liking both chapters, keep it coming.
Dandie (Chapter 4) - Thu 23 Jan 2014
Fabulous! Another wonderful chapter. Will be looking out for more. :)
tonya (Chapter 4) - Thu 23 Jan 2014
excellent. looking forward to next chapter
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