Reviews for Save my Race by FurvusCorvus

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consuelo marquez (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Jan 2014

this story is really good. but it seems that everything is happening to quickly, not the pace of the story itself, but like when you write the interaction between the characters its like "this, then this, then this happened"  maybe a tiny bit of transition would be good. maybe describe the scenery to try to fill in some of the "space" BUT other than that  its great    sorry if this seems really rude and bossy


rose (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Jan 2014

next chapter please


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