Reviews for I Hate You by Chante

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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 11) - Fri 20 Jun 2014

Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. Like it, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!


Miss C (Chapter 11) - Fri 20 Jun 2014

Keep up the great work. I've been following your story.


Ana (Chapter 10) - Thu 05 Jun 2014

Ohhhhh *-* So they were mated, they just don't remember *-* 

Love it! :D

Thanks for the update! <3 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 10) - Wed 04 Jun 2014

Nice chapter, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.

 


Ana (Chapter 9) - Wed 14 May 2014

This story is extraordinary! :D 

Can't wait to read more! ;)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Sun 11 May 2014

Like it, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

 


Pang Lin (Chapter 9) - Sun 11 May 2014

You've updated! And what a chapter that is! The mystery is getting more complex. I wonder if Kagome made a wish on the Shikon and what is was that it made everyone forget certain things. I'm curious now why Sesshoumaru remembers that Kagome didn't like him calling her names but doesn't remember other things....

This is getting more exiting, so I really hope you'll update soon!! Can't wait for more hints.... :D


Haven (Chapter 8) - Sun 11 May 2014

I must admit I'm rather confused with the turn of events with this new story line.  So this Sess along with his dad and the Inutachi lived centuries ago and battled Naraku (it seems) for the while Shikon mess.  That's fine, but what kind of bums me out (and I'm being completely honest here), why would Sess (a lordly prince and warrior) who is obviously a fully matured centuries old youkai at this point, make it all the way to the modern era only to GO TO HIGH SCHOOL??!!!  Why would he go to high school?  With this new subplot, it just seems unreal that he would put up with the ansgsty BS that is high school.   I must say I don't get it.  It would make sense if he were a business man but a high school student?  Hopefully it will be explained in future chapters but this new turn of events pulls me right out of the story especially thinking about earlier chaps when he's behind the school with Kagura...Not trying to be harsh, just an honest critique.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 8) - Tue 15 Apr 2014

Great, keep it coming


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 7) - Sun 13 Apr 2014

Wow, keep it coming.


Akita (Chapter 7) - Sun 13 Apr 2014

So suspenseful. So...wow...more please


Pang Lin (Chapter 6) - Sun 06 Apr 2014

 My dear, that was a surprising turn! But I liked ot very much. I actually didn't think the story would have a deeper plot, so that was definitely a nice change. Also, I would like to comment on your language. It's not easy to write a story from second person perspective bit you've managed to that really well. Though I wish you would put more attention to grammar, as it can sometimes be a bit annoying, especially since you've such a beautiful way of expresing yourself and the story otherwise has good flow.

I definitely look forward to next chapter.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Sun 06 Apr 2014

Keep it coming.


rose (Chapter 6) - Sun 06 Apr 2014

next chapter please


Akita (Chapter 6) - Sun 06 Apr 2014

If only there were more


Brittany (Chapter 1) - Thu 03 Apr 2014

Interesting. I hope you update soon 


Lady Sann (Chapter 5) - Sun 30 Mar 2014

I feel like i missed something with this chapter


Ana (Chapter 5) - Sun 30 Mar 2014

This... was... Hot. *-* So very hot! *-* 

Thank you for sharing eith us! <3 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Sat 29 Mar 2014

Nice, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!


Akita (Chapter 5) - Sat 29 Mar 2014

Wow, totally hooked in 5 chapters and i sooo want more


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