I like it. I would love to read more.
Great story, it's just a lil annoying that you change scenes without a break of some sort. Also, did you have to have Rin with Sess? I'm sorry, it's just getting pretty old that where there's Sess, Rin just has be there too, mostly as his daughter. It's like she's now some mole that's always attached to him. People need to be more original. Anyways, at least you didn't add Shippo as her son; another things that's getting old. Well, keep up the good work and can't wait til you update?
Great story, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
Kagome has a puppy eared son.... hmmm.....
I was hooked on the first chapter, too!!!
Wow! This story is so great! Keep up the good work(:
mari (Chapter 3) - Sun 26 Jan 2014
loved the update thank you.
Faux66 (Chapter 3) - Sun 26 Jan 2014
this story is amazing I'm hooked within the first chap
Cinno (Chapter 2) - Sat 25 Jan 2014
Please update soon this story is getting really good
Tami (Chapter 2) - Sat 04 Jan 2014
This fanfic is so original and sweet. I can't wait to see how the story develops. Is Kouta Kagome's brother, biological son or adopted son? And what's the story on Sesshomaru and Rin? I'm looking forward to your updates
Ashley (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Dec 2013
Awesome start. Love the story and the characterization. I loved the way you described a parents view on the growth of children as well as showing kagome's maturity. Can't wait for an update! !
Pfairy (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Dec 2013
I love this fic, so far. It looks like it will be amazing all around. Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more!
Sheila (Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Dec 2013
So far I like this a lot. I hope they have more interaction via email soon.
Tx2 (Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Dec 2013
Absolutely adorable and heartfelt. The visuals of the sunset were bright in my mind.
Cant wait for an update!!
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