Sorry I put Kathy I ment kate. My apoligies.
Well Kathy, I'm sorry you feel that way , as I stated before this is my first fic, no one is perfect. Kagome acts different from the anime because this is my story, I make her act how I want. I didn't come here to be flammed on my first fic, maybe if you would have been a littler nicer about it, express your opinion about it in a constrictive way to help me better my story, instead you write as if I'm a professional author. But thank you for your opinion anyways, have a nice day.
Kaitlyn (Chapter 8) - Sun 08 Dec 2013
i was pretty interested in this story, up until the last chapter and this one. i guess its your own choice of how to construct characters, but the more i see of kagome, the more i dislike her. i dont feel the person depicted is like the one of the anime, because that kagome was really a mary sue type, you know? and i dont like this kagome because she is like an overwhelmin sex drive cloaked in a thinly constructed layer of false independence. i really hate when the female lead of any story acts like she will not let herself be treated like dirt and then rolls over at the first flash of dick. i just cant read about a brainless sexpot with no respec for herself.
rose (Chapter 8) - Sun 08 Dec 2013
next chapter please
Suka25 (Chapter 7) - Sat 07 Dec 2013
GO Kagome GO Kagome! Tell him like it is!!!!!
Ana (Chapter 7) - Sat 07 Dec 2013
uh xD That escaleted quikly xD
Love it <3
rose (Chapter 7) - Sat 07 Dec 2013
next chapter please
Ana (Chapter 6) - Fri 06 Dec 2013
That´s it, now you made me blush :P
You are very welcome. I´m glad I could hel! =D
And it´s much better this way ^^ The fic just gained a flow :D
Nice work <3
l found this chapter good l want to find inuyasha love elsewhere not to infiernno bery with kikio
Ana (Chapter 6) - Fri 06 Dec 2013
Hey ^^
Okay, this is an opinion, and by any means, I want you to see it as a flame ^^
I love the story and the fact that Kagome is now a demon. But I get the felling that she gave up to early! I has expectiong a bit more of a fight! xD Like Sess trying to convince her and she would say now. I think it went down to fast!
Other than that a like! :D thank you for the update but I´ll be expecting a new chapter soon :P
Ana (Chapter 5) - Fri 06 Dec 2013
I liked it ;) nice work
really really loving the story, can't wait to see what Kagome will do to Sesshomaru :)
Can't wait to read more :)
Rhonda (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Dec 2013
Koga, Koga, Koga......... When will he ever learn huh??
Love the storyline and looking forward to more..... :p
rose (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Dec 2013
next chapter please
i found lovely the story
Zeelian (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Dec 2013
Has potential but as stated before could use a beta to find those little things.
One thing i got hung up on tho is that the story is placed post-canon so Kagome should recognize Inu no Taisho even in a modern suit, and she would ofc instantly know who it is upon him introducing himself, she has after all heard of him enough times, and seen both his great skeleton aswell as his ghost, not to mention knowing both his sons well enough. I just can't wrap my head around her not instantly realizing who it is, especially since he does state his name.
Page 10 of 11
| | | | | | | | | | | | | | | |