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rose (Chapter 8) - Tue 10 Dec 2013

next chapter please


candy (Chapter 7) - Mon 09 Dec 2013

I think this is so cool you got to keep going it is way too good! Keep it up I love  this story!


Ana (Chapter 8) - Sun 08 Dec 2013

Well i'm sure that sess ego is now bigger than ever xD 


(Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Dec 2013

Sorry I put Kathy I ment kate. My apoligies. 


(Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Dec 2013

Well Kathy, I'm sorry you feel that way , as I stated before this is my first fic, no one is perfect. Kagome acts different from the anime because this is my story, I make her act how I want. I didn't come here to be flammed on my first fic, maybe if you would have been a littler nicer about it, express your opinion about it in a constrictive way to help me better my story, instead you write as if I'm a professional author. But thank you for your opinion anyways, have a nice day.


Kaitlyn (Chapter 8) - Sun 08 Dec 2013

i was pretty interested in this story, up until the last chapter and this one. i guess its your own choice of how to construct characters, but the more i see of kagome, the more i dislike her. i dont feel the person depicted is like the one of the anime, because that kagome was really a mary sue type, you know? and i dont like this kagome because she is like an overwhelmin sex drive cloaked in a thinly constructed layer of false independence. i really hate when the female lead of any story acts like she will not let herself be treated like dirt and then rolls over at the first flash of dick. i just cant read about a brainless sexpot with no respec for herself. 


rose (Chapter 8) - Sun 08 Dec 2013

next chapter please


Suka25 (Chapter 7) - Sat 07 Dec 2013

GO Kagome GO Kagome! Tell him like it is!!!!!


Ana (Chapter 7) - Sat 07 Dec 2013

uh xD That escaleted quikly xD

Love it <3


rose (Chapter 7) - Sat 07 Dec 2013

next chapter please


Ana (Chapter 6) - Fri 06 Dec 2013

That´s it, now you made me blush :P

You are very welcome. I´m glad I could hel! =D

And it´s much better this way ^^ The fic just gained a flow :D 

Nice work <3 


elizabeth (Chapter 6) - Fri 06 Dec 2013

l  found this chapter good  l want  to find  inuyasha love  elsewhere not to  infiernno  bery with  kikio


Ana (Chapter 6) - Fri 06 Dec 2013

Hey ^^

Okay, this is an opinion, and by any means, I want you to see it as a flame ^^

I love the story and the fact that Kagome is now a demon. But I get the felling that she gave up to early! I has expectiong a bit more of a fight! xD Like Sess trying to convince her and she would say now. I think it went down to fast!

Other than that a like! :D thank you for the update but I´ll be expecting a new chapter soon :P


Ana (Chapter 5) - Fri 06 Dec 2013

I liked it ;) nice work 


Mskumiko (Chapter 5) - Fri 06 Dec 2013

really really loving the story, can't wait to see what Kagome will do to Sesshomaru :)


Mskumiko (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Dec 2013

Can't wait to read more :)


Rhonda (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Dec 2013

Koga, Koga, Koga......... When will he ever learn huh??

Love the storyline and looking forward to more.....   :p

 


rose (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Dec 2013

next chapter please


elizabeth (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Dec 2013

i found  lovely  the story


Zeelian (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Dec 2013

Has potential but as stated before could use a beta to find those little things.

 

One thing i got hung up on tho is that the story is placed post-canon so Kagome should recognize Inu no Taisho even in a modern suit, and she would ofc instantly know who it is upon him introducing himself, she has after all heard of him enough times, and seen both his great skeleton aswell as his ghost, not to mention knowing both his sons well enough. I just can't wrap my head around her not instantly realizing who it is, especially since he does state his name.


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