Hello,
the writing style may not be one of your best in this fic, but in this case I don't care, because I love the message you are sending!!!
I love your idea of a Sesshoumaru who supports orphans and tries every year to give them a beautiful and unforgettable Christmas! And I love that he doesn't care about how much money he will "loose" with such an event ... many portray him as a ruthless businessman who cares only about his profit. You showed us another site of him, a more compassion one, and I liked that very much!
I also liked that Sesshomaru hadn't "special" feelings only for Rin. You wrote about two other children he paid special attention to. It doesn't always have to be only Rin! So well done!!!
It's also rather nice to read a story where Kagome doesn't have to accomplish something "humanly" impossible to gain Sesshoumaru's attention and interested. They share their love for children and Christmas!
This is a nice fic with a wonderful message and I enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing!!!
