Lovely story 

 Hey. I just finished your story. It was very interesting, i liked it. I have two comments though if you are interested:

1) In the last chapter you wrote that Kagome has brown eyes, but since the beginning you clearly, and repeatedly, say that she has cristal blue eyes.

2) You give a lot of unnecessary details. It makes the story a little tedious to read. If you are going to say how someone felt.. don't repeat it again making that person say it outloud with the same words you used to discribe it.

If you are interested, I would love to explain better my second point. ^^

Thank you, I enjoyed your fanfic.

BlackspotMaggie.

Hmn that turned out to be a really good story. Cute and flowing. It didn't skip around it didn't get confusing until this last chapter lol.

Very nice. I loved it. You may wish for a beta to clean up the few spelling errors I found, and at the end of the story in the last chapter, as she wakes and he examines her, you have it that her eyes are brown, and not blue. You may wish to fix this.

I loved the story!

Not trying to be negative, because lord knows these people will flag you asap for being honest about a story.It's good, I want to keep reading but I find myself skipping through rather than actually reading the story. You are constantly repeating yourself. so that could use some work. I mean how many times must we read that Isao was honorable, what Sess dad said to him under a full moon or that the villagers glared and hate Kagome?,etc. Advice would be to mention it, but not retell the whole thing over and over again. It's repetitive. Trust me we are reading, so we already know what has occurred. there are some grammar errors, but the writing is still very readable

This story was wonderful and I enjoyed it. My birthday was yesterday.

I just read your story.  The plot was wonderful and you definitely have some talent :)  Only one comment that could make this story more enjoyable to read: Proofread more.  There were a number of run-on sentences that made the story really difficult to follow at times.  There were also a ton of word repeats, like: "Of course, he would have to heal first of course", etc.  Minor detail most of the time, but they can be distracting.  In fact, extreme nit-pickers (aka me) didn't really want to read your story at first because the summary had the same issues, and would've missed out on a good story.  No offense meant~ 

YAY!!! Nice ending

l loved the end 

thanks for sharing such a beautiful story. . and i can't wait for the next story from you. . :)

it was a lovely story :)

Thank you! <3 

Awe!! Amazing as always.  Update soon! !

Ohhhhhhhhhhh! That was so romantic! 

Thank you for the update <3 

This chapter was cool, I'm glad Naraku is dead and Kagome is alive, keep it coming. 

Naraku is so dead, keep it coming. 

how can you stop there? (Puppy eyes) that was mean xD 

poor Kagome :( 

Thank you for the update <3 

dun dun dun. . more coming please

HOLY CRAP!!!! I could not stop reading and I MUST have more!! This is just excellent!!