Reviews for Transgressions by wonderbug

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Kitsune Diva (Chapter 25) - Thu 21 Feb 2019

I love your story.  It is well written and I like the way you write the complex emotions that each character feels.  You have a talent for showing the internal struggles of Sesshomaru and Kagome in a way that feels natural for the story.  I like that you take your time with the details in your sex scenes and there isn't a rush to full intercourse. There is a sense of urgency and tension but a surprise in how far Kagome and Sesshomaru will go; that makes it a more enjoyable read for me.  I like how the relationship between Kagome and Sesshomaru is never clear cut and this gives the development of it a more dynamic progression. I look forward to reading more of your story.


Gee (Chapter 25) - Sun 17 Feb 2019

Awww these two... 

C'mon Kagome  Just tell him what you want from him & if he can't give it to you that's when you leave him so you're clear that you won't settle for anything less.

 

Thanks for the update! 


ponpiri (Chapter 25) - Sun 17 Feb 2019

I just want his mama to show up one time. One time.

Jakken is a riot. He's like that co-dependent best friend that dangles his friend's ex-girlfriend in front of him because he doesn't like the new gf. 

This chapter was kind of sad because their problem is simply a lack of communication and different expectations. But lol at how Mr demon in charge couldn't figure out Kagomes body language even after his encounter with that dark-haired blue-eye demoness that didn't want to screw him.

He's so delusional. Btw, this is the first time I've found his character to be so dumb but likable at the same time.


Alison (Chapter 25) - Sat 16 Feb 2019

AHHH I love this story!!!! I'm glad Kagome stood up for herself she's better than becoming some concubine or side chic she is worth more and after all that crap with Inuyasha, she realizes it. It's going to be hard but Sesshomaru's going to have to get over himself. My only question is with her being human how will they be together forever?


Carmen Kent (Chapter 25) - Sat 16 Feb 2019

This so so good!!!! Love it. 


R (Chapter 25) - Sat 16 Feb 2019

Oh dear, I have to agree with another reviewer, I was so disappointed in Kagome in this chapter. She’s doing that immature, blind stumble into exacerbating her own fear with storytelling. Despite her misgivings and fears (rational or not), both she and Sesshoumaru have built rapport during their travel; a delicate camaraderie. Therefore, to see her act out wildly mixed signals towards him seems so...unfortunate...when it seems she could have fearlessly just said what needed saying, as she always does. I guess it’s the ol’ reject-before-being-rejected thread. Ack, Kagome! It’s funny to feel more sympathy for Sesshoumaru here. Perhaps as a reader I identify more with her plight and feel more frustration her because I wish for her to have greater emotional growth. Her rejection of him, without communication, is no better than how she perceives his treatment. That said, the ending of that chapter was spooky. Such wonderful writing, as always!


Mariah (Chapter 25) - Sat 16 Feb 2019

I meeedn more!!!


Yasmine (Chapter 25) - Sat 16 Feb 2019

I love this story.  Can't wait to know what sesshoumaru is thinking now. I felt so angry at him for even considering someone else. He needs to be taught a lesson!  

Can't wait for the next chapter xx


Ree-san (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Feb 2019

I'm disappointed in Kagome.  She has suddenly forgotten that he is not a modern human male?  His behavior and how he talks to her has not changed, but she suddenly wants to consider him compared to what she would want from a modern man.  I re-read a few chapters and his devotion is in his behavior, as he has always been a being of action more than words.  None of what he said to her was offensive and was actual a sign of how important she is to him and she just is suddenly dismissive of that.  Very puzzling.  I really hope this isn't dragged out too long because I'm getting frustrated with her unfortunately.  


Vale (Chapter 24) - Fri 15 Feb 2019

Hello, so. I read it all in one sitting and holy shit. I don’t even know where to start? I absolutely adore it. Since the start I’ve loved Kagome’s character and the way you portray it. Very human, still she has mountains of courage. And Sesshomaru is a very complicated subject but I find you write him wonderfully. You have a way with words. I particularly like how you don’t make their story easy, it’s real. And oh god miscommunication is a big thing! But understandable! They need to sit down and have a nice chat. I absolutely get what Kagome’s feeling but she needs to understand Sesshomaru doesn’t get this kind of things! He’s dense! Ahahah anyway, I’m new to this site and I hope I managed to turn on notifications for this story because I am absolutely dying for more. Kisses x 


Gee (Chapter 24) - Tue 05 Feb 2019

I'm hoping Sesshomaru gets an actual competitor w/ Kagome so he can put his shit together... You know.. Someone who completes the emotional void Sesshomaru declines to fulfill.. Just so he realizes his dick is not everything  ????????????


Alesia (Chapter 24) - Tue 05 Feb 2019

Really awesome


Miss C (Chapter 23) - Mon 04 Feb 2019

I have the feeling that there is a miscommunication. I really thing he wants he to be his, but not in the way she is assuming.


Skylar (Chapter 24) - Mon 04 Feb 2019

Oh no! Kagome is feeling guilty that she finally let him in. Poor girl.


Alison (Chapter 24) - Sun 03 Feb 2019

I don't even know what to think. I totally get Kagome and her reserved feelings for Sesshomaru. She's played second place before and she will not be doing that again. Sesshomaru's an idiot of e thinks she's becoming anyone's consort. I hope they beat Naraku fix the jewel and she leaves for a couple years to make him see what he had. And that stupid imp needs to shut up! Love your story btw it's still the best.


Nilee1 (Chapter 24) - Sun 03 Feb 2019

This makes me very sad. She thought it was love, but Sesshomaru’s mental ramblings sound more like obsession. If this gets out of hand, if she can’t make him understan; will she be faced with rape? Will he call it submission? She can still fry his ass, can’t she?


ponpiri (Chapter 24) - Sun 03 Feb 2019

The old demon is delusional. And lol at Jakken being shady.


ponpiri (Chapter 23) - Sun 20 Jan 2019

Aw poor Kagome. She thinks he only sees her as sex... but since when has a fwb saved their partner from dying??? These fools typically don't bother to text a good morning LOL

Will Sesshoumaru's mother make an appearance? 


Gee (Chapter 23) - Sat 19 Jan 2019

Aww. I hope Sesshomaru won't be that dense & understand what Kagome feels but... Iguess he will be dense. I'm not even sure if he knows what he's feeling himself. Kagome mught end up running away from him more before he realuzes... 


Alison (Chapter 23) - Sat 19 Jan 2019

Everything was going perfectly until the end where you broke my heart in two. I love your story and this couple I want them together so bad!!!! It makes complete sense that she's upset because she's falling in love with him and while he's definitely possessive of her I fear like Kagome that he only sees her as an object of his lust and obsession. I would really like him to see her as more but I don't know how since her lifespan is a lot shorter and she is human. *Sigh* You both made and ruined my day.  


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