Reviews for Transgressions by wonderbug

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ponpiri (Chapter 20) - Sun 16 Dec 2018

This is the best chapter yet. There are so many characters interacting with each other, yet you've managed to give the distinct voices that are true the original work. Good job! I can't wait to see how this all ends.


Koree (Chapter 20) - Sun 16 Dec 2018

I had just finished posting my last review for the previous chap when you updated lol , great chap


Blommie8 (Chapter 20) - Sun 16 Dec 2018
the batle is great,.....next please.cab't wait for naraku came out

erika (Chapter 20) - Sun 16 Dec 2018

I thoroughly enjoy your work and was excited for your update!! Please don't leave me in suspense! Can't wait for another update!!


Alison (Chapter 20) - Sun 16 Dec 2018

AHHHH I love this it's so on point with the actual series. And I adore Kagome and Sesshomaru's growing relationship. Keep it up. Can't wait to read more.   


Jennifer (Chapter 20) - Sat 15 Dec 2018

Ahhhhhhh!!!! What an incredible chapter! Update again soon!!!


Koree (Chapter 19) - Sat 15 Dec 2018

The perverted side of me truly enjoyed this chap but also felt cheated because they didn’t truly go all the way xD I was sitting on the edge of my seat reading like “ ooooo he’s about to do is , he did it , oooooooo “ only for him to back out lmao I was hurt lol . Anywho enough of my perverted mind amazing chap 


Alison (Chapter 19) - Mon 03 Dec 2018

Entei's the best. And I'm a little confused did they or did they not have sex. And if the answer is the latter then what the heck are they waiting for?!?!!?!?


Mysheeki (Chapter 19) - Sun 02 Dec 2018

Oh my. What a wonderful chapter! <3 <3 love it!!!!


Jennifer (Chapter 19) - Sat 01 Dec 2018

Amazing story! Update soon!


Inuyaoi (Chapter 1) - Sat 01 Dec 2018

Yup. Just as good as the second time, better because I missed some things. 

And this:

"There’s so much,” she whispered, her slick fingers slipping between them..." 

Practically everywhere was my first thought. God, I hoped. 

And this: 

"This,” he murmured just above her dripping core, her whole body shuddering as he tasted her in one long, lingering stroke, “is what I have craved.”

Shiiiiit. Hot.

And this:

“Would you like to see,” he said as he leaned back over her, something fluffy and soft sliding underneath her neck and shoulders, propping her up, “how desperate I am for you?”

*dies*

"Kagome could take the rather forceful hint—not that she needed much persuading. As her lips closed around him, Sesshoumaru released the gravelly, pent-up groan she suspected he’d been repressing, his claws combing and clutching at her messy hair. At one particularly sharp tug, her hand slipped from its resting place on his marble thigh, her name tearing raggedly from his throat as her thumb swept accidentally over the arc of a testicle."

Bless the written word. 


Inuyaoi (Chapter 19) - Sat 01 Dec 2018

Oh sweet Jesus 

this was  an experience! I don’t know what to comment on first. Like a heathen clung, you made sesshomaru taste his own... sample.  And you snuck it in there too! Girl... I’m going to read it again after this comment. 

and I had looked over my shoulder a few times because it just wouldn’t stop. “Surely  they’re done now—oh no. No they are not. There he goes, not empty yet.” And the visuals... Have mercy. My favorite part was sesshomaru stroking himself— yessss.  because I like to watch.

In short, excellent smut. 


Koree (Chapter 18) - Wed 28 Nov 2018

Lmao I have a feeling I know who just dragged her from her nap , great chap


SammyJams (Chapter 18) - Mon 26 Nov 2018

Omg I just love this story! I can’t wait to read more!


ponpiri (Chapter 18) - Sun 25 Nov 2018

Looks like Sesshoumaru was looking for a reason to peep on her while bathing. 

 

Anyway, as a lightweight Inuyasha-hater, I always felt that the 'Inuyasha gets strength' storyline was bullcrap. The only thing he really gained was self-acceptance, whereas all of his strength either came from Kagome's ridiculous blind faith in him or his father's sword. Take either away and he'd be an insecure mess.


Alison (Chapter 18) - Sat 24 Nov 2018

Poor Sesshomaru he did not have a good relationship with his dad. Frankly, I never liked Toga talked a lot of smack but couldn't stay loyal to one woman. And Sesshomaru's mom was cool. I also like how you explain why he thinks falling in love with a human is a bad idea you didn't make him prejudice if anything his reasons are realistic for someone who lives practically forever. Everyone wants to grow old with the person they love but if your a yokai who fell in love with a human you can't do that. Hope the story has Kagome become immortal somehow or better yet become a diayokai like Sesshomaru. 


FayeMegan (Chapter 18) - Sat 24 Nov 2018

Poor Kagome! Gonna guess it's Sesshoumaru pulling her from the spring, I wonder what will happen next..


Esther (Chapter 18) - Sat 24 Nov 2018

I like how is the personality of sesshomaru in this fic, it is so similar to manga / anime.
I want to know what will happen in the next chapter.
I hope you can update soon.
I'll be waiting for some update of yours.


Cat (Chapter 18) - Sat 24 Nov 2018

Who ripped her from the hotsprings?!?!?!


demon13o (Chapter 17) - Fri 23 Nov 2018

xD That last statement "That's my gramps you're petting human." I died rofl! Awesome chapter can't wait for what's to come next.


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