Reviews for Transgressions by wonderbug

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BlindHuntress (Chapter 8) - Sun 21 Jan 2018

More please! I love the vividness of this story, it’s lovely!


Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 8) - Sat 30 Dec 2017

I believe i had found a new gem! And this is so precious and read this all the way!!! Thank you! Very Much!


Erika (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 May 2017

Still waiting for ch 9 :(


Katarina (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Nov 2016

Hey.:) 

I just wanted to ask if you will finish your stories anytime? because you have still some fans out here and I look monthly since 2014 and decided to ask you, because sometimes I reread them and I'm still as hooked up.:) 


The-infamous-one (Chapter 8) - Mon 17 Oct 2016

I'm just saying, leaving your story like this is unbelievably cruel.  Ugg. Anyways I hope that sometime soon you will come back to this and finish it. It's to good to leave as is.  Good luck


rosheemary (Chapter 8) - Thu 20 Aug 2015

oh my.. moh my... oh my... you really left super HUGE cliff-hanger there gals xD

i really love this!!! this story's so good... it's killing me to know what sesshomaru going to say, whether he's gonna tell kagome that he wanna kill her, or... he wanna continue their 'unfinished business', tehee..

Your story is so awesome, i hope that you haven't abandoned this story. Because it's poor thing to leave their fate hanging like that (>_<).

Please update your wonderful story, i really can't wait it :)

 

roshy


Eva (Chapter 8) - Tue 26 May 2015

I've recently discovered your work through another favorite of mine and read you dry, then followed you to Dokuga. I look forward to more of your work. I enjoy how Kagome and Sesshoumaru have been drawn together inexorably against their will, without sappy contrived plot devices. It's good to see the agonizing character growth for both of them that will leave them scared, but more mature and at peace with themselves within their own skins. You've handled this story so well. I look forward to Kagome finally living up to her nature and Sesshoumaru realizing that he is a diayoukai.


Eris (Chapter 8) - Wed 12 Nov 2014

Please update soon!!!!  I've been checking very often...wonderful story!


WildcatYST (Chapter 8) - Wed 08 Oct 2014

Love, love, love this story. Your character portrayals are spot on and the tension is just right.  I hope you update again soon! 


NelysofMordor (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Sep 2014

Oh my word. I desperately check this story at least once a week (sometimes once a day :-P) to see if it's been updated. Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease Update!! Phew. (Seriously, this is amazing). Can't wait!! :-P


WickedLittleGirl (Chapter 8) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

I'm like a junkie that needs their fix.  After three months of waiting, you'd think I'd have gotten over my addiction, but no.  Please update soon!  :)


lilithblood (Chapter 8) - Mon 01 Sep 2014

I've been thinking about it and it's been so long since you've updated this story. Any chance you might update it soon?

 


Philosophy Blue (Chapter 8) - Mon 21 Jul 2014
Update real soon! I kno firsthand how real life gets in the way but still I can't get enough of this story!

Loren (Chapter 8) - Sun 13 Jul 2014

Girl ! Please do update! I'm dying here.. please please continue


Koi (Chapter 8) - Fri 13 Jun 2014

What a mean mean cliffy!!! lol Please update sooon! lol I want to know what happens next now that inuyasha is died...and Sesshy demanding for Kag for her purity in order to help with the hunt of Naraku! So goood! I cna't wait until the next chapter!


Stella Mira (Chapter 8) - Thu 12 Jun 2014

Ye gods...you cannot stop there...why you do this to me?! T.T *wails*

Okay...I'm good, I can type this review now. Wow! I knew you'd keep to your word about dark coming this way, but I didn't expect so much so soon! I think I had a bit of an overload here. Damn...Inuyasha is dead. Well, I can't say I'm sad per se...hmm...I think I'll copy Sesshomaru and...frown. I actually dunno how to feel about it, but he did make amends even though they were...useless. Death makes everything useless...even regrets, even apologies. Nothing can be forgiven or forgotten just because someone dies - quite the opposite actually. Bah, Inuyasha, you idiot... Up in flames you went and left behind only ashes.

And that battle...seems like all hell broke lose! You know, I dun blame Miroku for his behavior, actually, I respect him. Shippo is just young...though, I think not as young as others like to believe. Dun ask me why, I always thought he took advantage of his young appearance to be a child forever when in reality he's lived long enough to know better. Still, he gets a free pass this time, just because. The one who irks me is Sango for some reason...I mean, she's so absorbed in her misery - with reason of course - but she becomes a hypocrite. People were given voice to speak, ya know? Meh, I just dun like people who make themselves the victims just because they can due to circumstances.

Now that I be done with the side characters...Kagome!! Dear god, woman...'tis like life as she knew it ended in a mere blink of an eye. She paid a huge price, and for what? For the indiscretions of others, not even her own... I mean...damn! And, still, she tries to make things right, to help in whatever way she can, to fix things broken long before she came into the mix. Unfortunately for her, she came to stay...what a weight to carry alone. I wonder, though, how does she really feel about the deal she's about to make? Yeah, she's pent, she wants him, she knows nobody else will do now, but how does she really feel?

Sesshomaru...dun do that to me! Gods, why must you make him so...so damn...I dun think there's a word for it. I only know that he makes me wanna cuss him just because he can't be real. Yesyes, he's unreal! There, found the word! Such men just dun exist...I'm so looking forward to his POV - like you wouldn't believe!!

Phew...I think I'm done, in terms of plot at least. Your word choice was excellent here, but what I loved most was the execution of the scenes, the emotional charge. It was so well put into words, amazing! How Kagome felt about Inuyasha, about his death, her own guilt...sublime! Then there was Miroku's portrayal which was hauntingly beautiful! I looove him, I freakin' love what you did with him! The last scene...wow...my knees went weak when your words became images in my mind! Fantastic! You have a way to make Sesshomaru so expressive with...well, minimum expressions. Furthermore, he be hot when he burns, and he burns. He might be dipped in ice, but whatever he feels, whether anger or lust or bitterness, is like fire sizzling quietly beaneath - until he lets it all out. I think dear Kagome will be burned alive in this fic... Well, I dunno about her, but it doesn't sound like a bad way to go...to me at least. XD

*takes breath* Otay, I'm done!! Thank you for this amazing chapter!! Please update soon, yes? :3 *hugs*


LavenderBoots (Chapter 8) - Thu 05 Jun 2014

Ahhhh! This is amazeballs!  You have conveyed so much of Sessoumaru's anger so well! I cannot wait to see how he feels about this encounter and "bargain." Thanks for the update, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

-Boots


Kounami (Chapter 8) - Thu 05 Jun 2014

Pure. Epic. Awesomeness. 


Nataly pinto de almwida (Chapter 8) - Thu 05 Jun 2014

Update soon! 


beachvilla (Chapter 8) - Wed 04 Jun 2014

Enjoying this story can't wait to see what Seshomaru's perspective is. 


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