Really enjoying the story

I really like this

and I have no problem with how you changed kagome

i agree with your reasons

im excited to see where this goes

I really like this story and would like to see you finish it. It is very well written with just a few little grammar errors but nothing that would take away from the story its self. I am anxious to see where you take this story and how it will end with Sessho and Kgome together I hope. Just know that you are an execellent writer. Looking forward to future updates.

Lovely story the development is wonderful lookong forward to future updates

Oh, I can't wait for more!  I am really enjoying this so far!

Hmm... interesting.... but aaaaww... why change her to a ryu? I like story that 'the way her is' more...

Great story sofar, but man what annoying name for the beast, way to long and it sounds very odd to me.

"Dakurifurekushon" seems to be a romanization of how a japanese speaking person would pronounce the english words "Dark Reflection" not the actual japanese words for it aka some kind of wasei eigo. Or just the english word written with katakana and then romanized.

A more suitable translation would perhapps be Kurai (Dark, afaik derived from "kuro" black) and Jisei (reflection, also self-examination, reflection over oneself) and combine those to Kuraijisei (might not be entirely correct to do such a straight combination, but anyway).

It just feels odd to have a wasei eigo in the middle of everything when the characters at all other points speak "perfect"/"pure" english (with the exeption of using some japanese titles like -sama) and also for a name to be one, feels like the name should either be fully japanese, or if the name is english, just leave it as english and not "japanize" the pronounciation.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

Poor Kagome! She always gets the bad end of the deal. Oh well. Great start, cant wait til more.

~*Dragon*~