Nice.
You can't let it end like this!
We have to know why Tensaiga didn't work! And we have to let them end up together! And poor Rin!
And we have to know how she died! And they have to live happily ever after!
Make more!
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Nov 2013
Please do continue this Lady Ai.......
CaithSidhe (Chapter 2) - Tue 12 Nov 2013
Please continue, the end is more like a cliffhanger. It's just too tantalizing.
marrissa (Chapter 2) - Tue 12 Nov 2013
a kagome reincarnated !
sara12 (Chapter 2) - Tue 12 Nov 2013
I really think you should continue with the story. Perhaps not too long but a few more chapters. The story has great potential.
Lexigal (Chapter 2) - Tue 12 Nov 2013
It was a beautiful Oneshot. I would love to see more from this because there is so much that is unknown.
I read this one as soon as I saw it posted, I didnt' review it as it was a completed oneshot, not because it wasn't good, but because it left me wanting more. There is a lot of back story and continuing story potential that I would love to read more about. I would be happy to read more on this one if you do decide to continue it.
Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Nov 2013
So many unanswered questions-- please do n't leave this as a one shot. Beautifully written even if it ends here.
Nicka (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Nov 2013
Beautiful, no other words needed.
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