Love the story. I was even emotional at some parts. I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

OMG! Intense, frightening and earthshaking is what comes to mind as I read the last few words of this chapter.  That disgusting dragon deserves anything and everything that Sesshoumaru will do to him.  It was also very sad, but very necessary for the last bit of Kagome's rose colored glasses to fade.  I wish it weren't necessary but she needs all her anger and rage to defeat an enemy with no redeeming qualities.  Something tells me she is going to be quite the warrior when she returns to the west! I can't wait to see what happens next! Well done!

Ryukostokken must die!!! >:( What a monster... Poor, poor Ko. What he did to her was unspeakable. And poor Kagome, too, for being forced to bear witness to such cruelty. :( :(

Gah, you have such a talent for character devlopment! Canon character portrayals aside, your OC's are definitely among the best I've seen in fanfiction (and I've read A LOT of fanfic, lol!). Seriously, my heart ACHES for Ko. She's so broken, yet so strong at the same time. Oh, the suffering she has endured under Ryukostokken's tyranny - yet even so, even knowing what it will cost her, she chooses to help Kagome. :'(

Thank you for this chapter, Imani. So many lovely words, but still not enough for me (I'm so greedy D:)! I cannot wait to see how the events unfold from here on out. :)

You’re writing skills are amazing as always. :D

I must say, there were a few parts in this chapter that I had to “just” not because I wasn’t enjoying, but because the description made my skill crawl.

But I loved this chapter! :D

Thank you for the update! <3

Gosh! This is awesome, as always! I don't review nearly often enough, but I just couldn't help it this time. I think I've said this before, but you have a way with words that seriously makes me envious. I was tearing up the entire time in this chapter, and I want to know more about Ko. Great job and I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter!! :)

Well I was expecting that Kagome would have lost her virtue or semi lost it from being captures by Ryukostokken. I hope Ko your Oc survives and lives at the and the story. I love your portrayal Kagome very close to her cannon personality and she very caring for both races and not prejudice as most human are with yokai and vice versa. I can see many of both races coming together and joining her with Sesshomaru when the real fight with the dragon clan begins.

I was expecting Kagome stay captured in the enemies territory longer but it seems you have other plans. Either way good chapter please update again ASAP.

Sincerely,

Authoress smcandy

I am in complete awe in the beauty of this story.  It is brilliant.  I was praying you would't let Kagome be raped, but to watch is something that will stick with Kagome for a lifetime...it will make her stronger...and I hope you allow Ko to say alive. She is truly a strong female, having to endure what has been forced upon her.  She would make a good friend for Kagoma and good mate for Inuyasha, Kouga, or someone who has aided the west, even if it will take a while for her to get over what she has been through.  I look forward to the chapter where Sess introduces the evil dragon to his end.

Brilliant story, amazing update and I can't wait for your next update.

thank you for the update loved it.

I cannot wait for Sesshomaru to kick some ass. 

AHHH!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Of course not the part of the woman being victimized but yeah. I can't wait to see what happens next. I get alerts when you update. I have to say I eagerly look foward to them. Please update soon. Does Kagome get way free? Does Sesshoumaru catch up with her? Does Ryukostokken find out before she has gotten sufficient distance? I need to know these things!

 Nice chapter, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!   

Can't wait for the next update!!

21 isn't showing up :,( 

chapter 21 is not showing up

-momo

You all ready posted this chapter. It is good tho.

Next update is not showing up. Chapter 21 is not showing up on the page.

Sincerely,

Authoress smcandy

I loved Shippo's description of what was happening between Sesshomaru's youki and Kagome's reiki!

Thank You for the update.... This is truly a Awesome story!!!!

Oh update soon please.  A awesome chapter yet again!

God I love your writing!! such a great story can't wait fr the next chapter :)