My favorite parts of this chapter are the segments featuring Inuyasha. I like having him be powerful and competent in and SesshxKagome peice. I would love to like Arashi, but if he truly supports the Northern lord even though he can see the danger to all youkai, he isn't nearly as clever as he thinks himself. I love Kimi. I always wish for her a new love and companion She seems like she has no one she can really trust that she can also be vulernable with.

Inuyasha hands down owns my favorite lines in fanfiction history from this story. He's fantastic! That inspirational speach he gave, and how he totally gave Natsou shit. Ha, loved it. I don't think i'll ever understand Arashi but i'm coming to terms with that. I also really appreciated the end part with Kimi and Hirimoto. It was..... refreshing? I adore your portrayal of Kimi and I think that little "picnic" at the end made her more, human (LOL) for lack of a better term. It was just nice to see her chilling with a homie haha. 

I freaking KNEW Kagome was gonna get frisky. It was only a matter of time... Bath, yeah ok lol

BRING ON THE NEXT CHAPTER! And while i'm here I must say I am thoroughly floored by the speed at which you produce a new chapter at such great quality. Aside from the erroneous typo, this is grade A quality greatness. You are a gem :)

Love love this ficc... and i love the way you write when i read this fic i can no i really do imagine the images the characters their action like an animation is playing its written so beautifully and detailed  <3 .... XD i usually don't like other people's story being involved it bores me i only ever wanted to read about sessho n kag ... but with you i love all the side story going around inuyasha , sessho's mothers , yheir childrens , arashi etc etc i really have fun reading about them i don't feel bored please just keep writing. Writing writing updating updating updating ...

Oh? Do I sense some sparks in Kimi's love life? That would be nice. I'm so proud of Inuyasha!! Look at him being a great leader and tactician. And Arashi, I have never been so torn about whether or not a character is a good guy or a bad guy!

Kimi is a card, haha! I think her and the bear demon could have something going on if she would allow it. well we know where her son got the denial of feelings from. I don't think that shiver was from the cold, lol!

Kimi and her lines. Let's hope the miko can walk after Sess's large affection:) 

I loved the early chapter with Inuyasha too. You write him so well.

And of course the hot steamy bath scene was welcomed too:)

Can't wait to read what adventures you have in store for us next.

I love your chapter so very much. Whenever I get an email notification that you have updated this story I stop what I was doing and read it, or more accurately, consume it. The quality of your writing always amazes me, the subtle ways you weave the story is delightful and the plot and characters engaging. Please do not stop or slow down you work-I don't know what I would do. 

if you ever do a spin off on Arashi - that would be awesome! Such an intriguing character. Can't wait to see what happens next. 

Hi there, this is very first review on this site.

Congratulations on writing an engaging and exciting story, while keeping the characters believable. I am loving the plot development and hope you'll see this through to the end. 

Also, thanks for making the villain realistic. Some stories just have too over the top villains. 

Cheers! 

Are you one of those authors who's going to change human anatomy so that women are 'in heat' at the same time they've got their period? I love your story and writing style, and you do an excellent job of creating the world for the story. But I've gotta say, it's confusing to see that done without some sort of reason, and I dunno how much I'll be able to keep my head in the story if you do it. In real life, women are the most fertile at the opposite end of the month from their periods. We CAN get pregnant while bleeding, just as we can at any other time during the month, but it's the time when we're least likely to do so. 

And teehee, just wait until Sess realizes she bleeds 12 times a year. I love the fluff scenes with them! Also, I love Ko. She's awesome.

Can't wait to see the next chapter!

amazing chapter! Love your writing And this story!

I'm glad Ko is still hanging in there.
One thing that I am most curious about - if Sesshomaru and Kagome mated (but he controlled himself enough not to attempt to get her pregnant), why wouldn't they mate? If - when they mate - could sense each other, or influx each other with their powers (whichever pros are part of mating), give Kagome some protection? Because she would be claimed, wouldn't she have more protection for being controlled or mated to someone else (even by force)? Or Sesshomaru could sense her if she was taken again?

Amazing chapter. Thought I was going to combust from the heat portrayed. my my if that's the foreplay the mating should be explosive. I also liked how you added love, reverence and innocence in this chapter, then to end it with urgency and danger was perfect. Thank you for updating.

Liking all four chapters, keep it coming.

Great chap.

I'm still confused about Ryu. Like, is he dangerous or is he just stupid? I'm not sure. Also, I feel like Kagome could say or do the most un-sexy thing and Sesshoumaru would still want her lol but I guess when you have a third person perspective, everything is so clear. Still beyond happy that Kento is innocent. lol am I the only one still thinking about that? probably :)

HOLY SHIT THAT WAS INTENSE!!!! OMGGGGG Also, omfg Kagome stop exerting yourself!!!

Those were my main reactions after reading this. Love seeing Inuyasha actively taking charge of his people too! He must be gaining a hell of a lot of respect with them, especially after this last incident

This chapter was so well paced! but then, the whole fic has been so far. I'm really excited to see where you take things from here!

Wow. What a powerful scene! My heart is pounding, I'm light-headed, I've got goosebumps. That was, I think, my favorite use of Kagome's reiki that I've ever seen in a fanfiction. 

Very well done!!

I can not express the great joy I have in reading this story, how amazing I find every chapter.

Your story has entrapped me from the very first chapter forward, to the point I search to see if there has been an update.

I Love it that much!

I look forward to your next installment!

I absoloutly LOVE your story! Your writing skills are superb!!! Please update soon I'm recovering from surgery and have retread your story twice because I adore it so!!!

<3 loveeee loveee loveee this chapter ^_^ yes kago would definitely do this <3